Black Poetry : Please Don't Go

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by Heartfelt, Nov 3, 2003.

  1. Heartfelt

    Heartfelt Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I forgave you when you said you made a mistake
    I can’t keep a grudge and having you leave me is more than I can take
    I truly never thought that you would be the one to leave me after all this time
    It should’ve been clear from the beginning that I wanted to make you mine

    I gave you all the signs and all the clues
    But you said you don’t want to speak to me any longer and that deeply made my heart blue
    I can’t and I don’t know how to live without you
    I’m not sure how you would understand that my love for you will always be true

    Everyone makes mistakes and I understand that
    But are you going to leave me and never come back?
    Immediately after I read your mail I cried
    Because I will never know what it’s like to look into your eyes

    I don’t want you to leave me like everyone else has done
    I’ve thought about you day and night hoping that u would be the one
    I’m trying, but the tears are hard to detain
    I just don’t want to have someone I care for so much leave me again
     
  2. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    very nice flow here ....flow on
     
  3. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    i like the flow
    very nice :angel1:
     
  4. redlady

    redlady Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    i felt your heart in this....
     
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