Black Poetry : Please Don't Go

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  1. Heartfelt

    Heartfelt Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I forgave you when you said you made a mistake
    I can’t keep a grudge and having you leave me is more than I can take
    I truly never thought that you would be the one to leave me after all this time
    It should’ve been clear from the beginning that I wanted to make you mine

    I gave you all the signs and all the clues
    But you said you don’t want to speak to me any longer and that deeply made my heart blue
    I can’t and I don’t know how to live without you
    I’m not sure how you would understand that my love for you will always be true

    Everyone makes mistakes and I understand that
    But are you going to leave me and never come back?
    Immediately after I read your mail I cried
    Because I will never know what it’s like to look into your eyes

    I don’t want you to leave me like everyone else has done
    I’ve thought about you day and night hoping that u would be the one
    I’m trying, but the tears are hard to detain
    I just don’t want to have someone I care for so much leave me again
     
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    Bluewater Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    i feel the vibes
    in your flow
    oh so deep
    let it flow
    let it flow
    much love to you
    Peace
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    feelin you on this here
    the depth of this deep piece
     
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    wow....got me all choked up in here
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Not only have I been there and done that, but I'm still wearing the t-shirt. I really felt this one--very touching!
     
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    nice peice..
    felt the vibe on dis..
    :angel1:
     
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    Heartfelt Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thank you all for reading and replying. I'm glad ya'll can feel the depth of this piece.
     
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    :luvv :luvv: :luvv: hey this was so deep, i was really feeling that, keep on flowing nice work fa real.
     
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    lilcherry76 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    this is what i call,
    a poem of the real.
    i know that it sounds stupid,
    and i know that no one will get it until.
    it is too late to understand,
    or for them to reply.
    keep the words coming kinfolk,
    don't let poetry die.............(u know what u doin')
     
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    why is this poem reading me ......lol had to up this one back cause i can still
    feel da affects of it through and through
     
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