Black Poetry : Please Continue On...

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by Desert Storm, Nov 24, 2007.

  1. Desert Storm

    Desert Storm Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Please continue on...
    Even if they do you wrong!
    Even if you have to sing your own little song!
    Trust me it won't be long...

    Please continue on...
    When people laugh at your face...
    Say your embarrassing to the human race.
    Make you feel so sick and tired of being sick and tired
    Breathe deeply
    And release your grace.

    Please continue on...
    Even when theres no rhyme to reason
    And the mind that used to be strong
    Is a smashed violin and soap box
    And humility you string along

    Please contine on...
    When life is staring you in the face.
    Challenging you and questioning you
    WHO ARE????? WHO ARE YOU???
    DO YOU KNOW? WILL YOU EVER KNOW???
    Fighting the universal battle within

    Don't give up
    Don't give in
    You know they'd love to see your
    Head stuck in the sand

    You know they'd love to see you at your final end
    But please continue on...
    And please continue holding on
    Even if you're only holding on by a limb

    Keep challenging
    And don't pretend
    Keep boxing it out
    Mayun, Cause it might last twelve rounds
    and KNOCK IT OUT!

    You know life be like, OH MY, OH MY, OH MERCY MY! and then...
    You know what to do
    When life challenges you
    And you continue to walk through
    The boo crowds

    Please Continue on..
    :SuN023:
    :hammer:
    :weights:
    :book:
    Desert Storm
     
  2. watzinaname

    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    How encouraging this was. You never know who may read this and needs to read just these words, cause we've all been through a time when we've felt as though we were through. I so appreciated this write sis.
     
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    PLATINUMILLITY1 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    there is nothing left to do
    but what has not been done
    and that is Win sis

    yeah...........
    U getting 1 for the people with this.......
     
  4. Desert Storm

    Desert Storm Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thanks Watzinaname, you know what I mean, Just been having some "REAL" moments lately, thanks for stoppin by.

    Platinum, you know what I mean also! This too shall pass... Thanks for stoppin by

    Come back 'gain y'all

    DS
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    feeling all of this as i sit and pound on it ......great write and expression
     
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    queentswana Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I have, many times came to the end of my rope, and like I know I should've done, I tied that knot...and held on.
    It's a known fact that when you're holding on, someone will pull you in,
    But if you let go ...so does everyone else!
    Thanks for the wisdom sis.
     
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