Black Poetry : Pleasant Frustrations

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  1. arthur1210

    arthur1210 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Pleasant Frustrations

    I may have spoken words to her indirectly
    but I feel she understood my implication

    I'm captivated by her endearing appeal
    I don't want to resist this temptation

    She has found the libidinous part of my disposition,
    and she has created some irritation

    She has made it challenging for accurate thought,
    or any reluctance in rationalization

    My thoughts are clouded with many fantasies
    As I think of every delightful expectation

    My curiosities are becoming overwhelming
    Thus, they are in need of exploration

    I want to understand how she likes to be touched,
    and help her endure many delightful sensations

    Many moments I behold her exquisiteness
    Many moments I feel pleasant frustrations

    Whether good or bad or, right or wrong,
    It is an exceptionally impassioned infatuation

    That is why I predict myself pursuing,
    Until, I attain absolute gratification
     
  2. cocobutterskyn

    cocobutterskyn Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    my mercy me...!

    I enjoyed that... especially the ending.

    nicely done &
    :wave: welcome to Destee's


    feelin'it souldeep!
    Coco :heart:
     
  3. angelicsage

    angelicsage Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    If I had the time...

    I would drop a flow in response..."WHOA"

    This was...."Awesome"...I read it more than once
    because I loved the feeling that emanated from it...


    :bowdown::bowdown::bowdown::bowdown::bowdown::bowdown::bowdown:
    :bowdown::bowdown::bowdown::bowdown::bowdown::bowdown::bowdown:


    You can drop a dime like this anytime...I'll be all eyes and mind!
     
  4. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    like da way you laid it all
    the way down...wow
    nice drop...:angel1:
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    lovin dis here keep flowin wow
     
  6. arthur1210

    arthur1210 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thanks to everyone for peeping this piece... Thanks for the comments, they made me feel good, I'm glad you all appreciated this one, it's become one of my favorites
     
  7. PositiveMindset

    PositiveMindset Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    No doubt, this is a nice one.

    Pursue.
     
  8. poeticlyspeakin

    poeticlyspeakin Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    omg!! omg!!!

    I am going thru this same thing!! I can totally relate!! I love u for this poem, lemme tell u. lol naw jk but for real I love this!!
     
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    Sometimes that certain someone is always on your mind...Enjoyed this, hope to read much more from you.
     
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