Black Poetry : Plea...sure

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by blakverb, Mar 14, 2002.

  1. blakverb

    blakverb Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    It's been so long...since...
    you've layed here....to anoint my
    MEL a niN with libations released
    from your chalice...of PLEaSURE...
    you ask me questions that I answer
    "PLEaS, U R Everything...that my libido
    has wished for"

    I looked under my pillow one night
    and there lay
    the key to finding your sound source
    ...a note that read...my tongue...

    ...you know it really digs excavating your
    silence for your moans and exhalations
    and tasting you is an experience that
    Oshun created in between her sheets
    as she lay waiting for the right...something
    that could make her come a rainstorm
    to fill the valleys between her thighs...

    but I dig the rainstorms that create lakes
    in all the impressions upon my sheets...and I can't
    even swim...I guess i'll die swallowing you...

    It's been so long since you've been here / since
    I've invited you to cleanse me with your PLEA
    SURES...and the motion of your existence.

    (c)2002 blakverb
     
  2. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    well u know da rest ! ........verb dis be pure pleasure for she!
    to stumble on man get yo flow on!!!! yeah heard me.....
     
  3. N2urSoul

    N2urSoul Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Hey! Hey! Hey! L:eeek::eeek:K at you .... :) WoWsErS .... :smokin:

    Wordz cannot eXpreSS how I've missed reading and re-reading that SGP flow!! You're scribe is so very intoxicating ... :D

    N2 is now*Reading while Under the Influence*= RUI

    Much :heart:
     
  4. Danilyn

    Danilyn Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Ok, now that I can breathe, allow me to say
    again that you got some lines up in hea that
    made a sista **** near crazy. Keep doin that
    thang Blak! :)
     
  5. GA_Sunshyne

    GA_Sunshyne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    My Royal BLaK-NeSs.


    i will not even type my first thought here for all to
    see... but i'd be happy to whisper it to you. :wink:

    serious-ly... you know i love this side of your
    perfect-ly poetic mind. this heah... was classic
    blakverb... it sorta had dat "cherryblueblackstrawberry"
    flava to it! (yeah dat one still lingers on my mental
    palate. :D )

    :heart:
    Elayne.
     
  6. GQ

    GQ Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Bout time you graced us with a little BLAK flava!!!

    Excellent, excellent vibe here poet!!!

    :peace:
    GQ
     
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    Reason Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Blak Man!

    I smell smoke!!! This hea is on fiyah!

    Reas
     
  8. blakverb

    blakverb Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Hey fam...to all ya'll thank ya kindly...no doubt...I'm Baaaaaaaackkkkk!

    blak
    Verb
     
  9. wildflower7

    wildflower7 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    oh yessss...
    you definitely are!
    -7:spinstar:
     
  10. cocobutterskyn

    cocobutterskyn Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Whoa! This was good, real good.

    It was my PLEASURE reading this.
    Thankyouverymuch! :D

    Poetically Turn'd Out!
    CCBSKYN
     
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