Black Poetry : Playing With Feelings

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  1. watzinaname

    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Playing with feelings
    Not a pretty game
    Just a personal vendetta
    Ego is its name
    Can I get him to like me
    Can I put her in a trance
    Put some voodoo in this potion
    Only to my song will they dance
    Another relationship that ended
    Another marriage gone down the drain
    Before the final chapter,
    Why not inflict more pain?
    Make her think you still adore her
    Make him feel there still is care
    When actually love left long ago
    But your mate remains unaware
    Ego sticks pins in the doll
    right around the heart
    When does the game end
    Why did it ever start
    Playing with feelings
    A cruel game of passionate play
    When your turn comes, make
    the right move, just turn and walk away...
     
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    arthur1210 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    wow... I'm feeling your words, and the flow is very nice for me

    as usual thanks for sharing
     
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    readin ya loud and clear, girl. sometimes lately I feel like goin off to a monastery, if ya know what I mean.
     
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    :sand: Blessings for sharing your gift. You raised the fundamental issue:
    "When will it end"....One Love for this one.

    Peace, Peace, and Prosperity......
     
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    and your turn will come..


    wise words sister...thought provoking piece
     
  6. watzinaname

    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Arthur, thank you so much for letting me know you're feeling this flow.
    Yes, gempis<deep sigh> I know what cha mean. Thanks for the support on this.
    Afrostotle thanks much for your kind words. I guess it will end when there are no more players.
    The funny thing about it, Sage, sometimes you don't even realize you're playing. Thanks for your constant support of my scribes.
     
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    Monetary going above and beyond PREMIUM MEMBER

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    Watz...

    this is tight. You write with a clear voice. I love that about your poetry. :D

    :thanks: for sharing your thoughts with us.

    :toast:
     
  8. watzinaname

    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thank you Money, even when I try to be a little ambiguous, it ends up coming out like crystal anyway. I appreciate your reply.
     
  9. SensualReality

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    Watz I'm feelin' this piece
    Walk away from the drama:lol:
    :wink:LOVE IT BRAVO
     
  10. watzinaname

    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Exactly Sensualreality, thank you for the love on this one.
     
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