Black Poetry : Playing the game of hard to get

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  1. lyricallyspeakn

    lyricallyspeakn New Member MEMBER

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    I walked in the door
    was the baddest ***** there
    must have stopped time
    cuz ******* i swear

    ****** dressed fine as hell
    girls dressed their best i guess
    but i walked in that mutha-
    but put them girls at rest

    Im dancing with these ******
    and even with these hoes
    looked over to my left
    he was standing at the do'

    I keep dancing
    thinking if a plot
    wondering should i do this
    should i get him or not
    see this brotha got me fiendin
    he got my body hot

    skully cap, black jeans
    arms crossed, wearing rings
    ecko boots, platinum chains
    deep set eyes, runnin thangs

    I ran to my girl
    said" I found a *****"
    which one?
    "security gaurd"
    she replied "oh that figures"

    I got on the floor
    we made eye contact
    the music vibrated
    i felt it in my back

    A fight broke out
    he brushed up against me
    I broke into a split
    just so he could see me

    He stared at me
    as he walked by
    mouthing some words
    gripping my thigh

    I danced again
    he circled once more
    but this time he stopped
    and watched me on the floor

    dance with me i said
    if you think you can handle it
    he backed up and said
    "NAW girl you too scandolous"

    so i turned it up a little more
    as he watched with his boys
    the dude i was dancing with
    was back there making noise

    after that he kept his distance
    watching from his eye
    i headed for the bathroom-brushed against
    again he grabbed my thigh

    I smiled to myself
    I didnt have to work real hard
    but i was determined to get
    that fine *** security gaurd

    I laughed to myself
    hes playing hard to get
    but he obviously doesnt know
    who hes ****** with

    I came back out
    whispered in his ear
    you'll be mine at the end of this here

    he kept a straight face
    looked straight ahead
    but i wasnt worried
    he was breaking down in his head

    I dissappeared for a few
    and watched this ***** sweat
    had him looking for me everywhere
    i stood watching from the back

    The last song was on
    the night was about over
    he came up behind me
    told me to bend over
    "oh no playboy remember
    Im too scandolous
    so dont even try
    cus you wont and cant handle this
    The lights came on
    I said"opps time to go"
    grabbed my jacket
    was gone with a boom
    wait for me he said
    as he quickly cleared the room

    He ran outside
    and handed me a paper
    he said "first you gotta promise
    that ill get to see you later

    I thought to my self
    Imma play hard to get
    thats what he wanted to do
    now its time to flip the script

    I remebered the number
    threw it on the ground
    walked away and yelled back at him
    "hope to see you around

    He turned to his boys
    they looked at him
    wondering whos the winner
    he smiled at them sly and said
    "it wasnt hard to get her!"
     
  2. lyricallyspeakn

    lyricallyspeakn New Member MEMBER

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    please let me know if you think im too blunt in my writting
     
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    Sierra Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Hi, :wave:

    WOW!! What a story!! I loved it!! You had me hanging on in suspense to the end!! Great first post!!

    I do not think it was overly blunt. Maybe you could leave out the swearing or curb it a little. Other than that I think it was simply the truth!!

    Welcome to the family!! I hope to read more from you!!

    My best to you!!

    ~Sierra~:heart:
     
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    Rico Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I really like this piece. But you see if I was he. We would have been playing this game forever. No, you are not being to blunt. Keep writting.
     
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    j'hiah Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    actually, l love the story...
    a pt. 2 would be nice :D
     
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    Alizentang Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Yeah part 2 PART 2 is definatly needed on this one.

    LOVIN IT!!

    hook line and sinker!!! U had me hooked from the title to the end!
    Just lived this story last night! :laugh:
     
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    agree with all! this piece is hot! Thats just the way players play all day.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    beautiful i like dis here .......c'mon pt.ll
     
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