Black Poetry : Playing the game of hard to get

[lyricallyspeakn]

I walked in the door
was the baddest ***** there
must have stopped time
cuz ******* i swear

****** dressed fine as hell
girls dressed their best i guess
but i walked in that mutha-
but put them girls at rest

Im dancing with these ******
and even with these hoes
looked over to my left
he was standing at the do'

I keep dancing
thinking if a plot
wondering should i do this
should i get him or not
see this brotha got me fiendin
he got my body hot

skully cap, black jeans
arms crossed, wearing rings
ecko boots, platinum chains
deep set eyes, runnin thangs

I ran to my girl
said" I found a *****"
which one?
"security gaurd"
she replied "oh that figures"

I got on the floor
we made eye contact
the music vibrated
i felt it in my back

A fight broke out
he brushed up against me
I broke into a split
just so he could see me

He stared at me
as he walked by
mouthing some words
gripping my thigh

I danced again
he circled once more
but this time he stopped
and watched me on the floor

dance with me i said
if you think you can handle it
he backed up and said
"NAW girl you too scandolous"

so i turned it up a little more
as he watched with his boys
the dude i was dancing with
was back there making noise

after that he kept his distance
watching from his eye
i headed for the bathroom-brushed against
again he grabbed my thigh

I smiled to myself
I didnt have to work real hard
but i was determined to get
that fine *** security gaurd

I laughed to myself
hes playing hard to get
but he obviously doesnt know
who hes ****** with

I came back out
whispered in his ear
you'll be mine at the end of this here

he kept a straight face
looked straight ahead
but i wasnt worried
he was breaking down in his head

I dissappeared for a few
and watched this ***** sweat
had him looking for me everywhere
i stood watching from the back

The last song was on
the night was about over
he came up behind me
told me to bend over
"oh no playboy remember
Im too scandolous
so dont even try
cus you wont and cant handle this
The lights came on
I said"opps time to go"
grabbed my jacket
was gone with a boom
wait for me he said
as he quickly cleared the room

He ran outside
and handed me a paper
he said "first you gotta promise
that ill get to see you later

I thought to my self
Imma play hard to get
thats what he wanted to do
now its time to flip the script

I remebered the number
threw it on the ground
walked away and yelled back at him
"hope to see you around

He turned to his boys
they looked at him
wondering whos the winner
he smiled at them sly and said
"it wasnt hard to get her!"

 

[lyricallyspeakn]

please let me know if you think im too blunt in my writting

 

[Sierra]

Hi,

WOW!! What a story!! I loved it!! You had me hanging on in suspense to the end!! Great first post!!

I do not think it was overly blunt. Maybe you could leave out the swearing or curb it a little. Other than that I think it was simply the truth!!

Welcome to the family!! I hope to read more from you!!

My best to you!!

~Sierra~

 

[Rico]

I really like this piece. But you see if I was he. We would have been playing this game forever. No, you are not being to blunt. Keep writting.

 

[j'hiah]

actually, l love the story...
a pt. 2 would be nice