Black Poetry : Playin It By Ear On The Threshold Of The Next Level

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by T, Jul 15, 2001.

  1. T

    T Well-Known Member MEMBER

    Joined:
    Mar 20, 2001
    Messages:
    126
    Likes Received:
    1
    Ratings:
    +1
    I'm having issues accepting
    life after a good thing ends....

    whether we split up
    mad, sad, or even glad
    how do we divy up
    when the relationship "transcEnds"?

    lovers who still care
    don't need 'representation'
    to settle the score...

    they basically take what they came
    with...(but in truth, they leave
    with more)

    I'm having problems with accepting
    life after loving transcEnds...
    so much beauty was accumulated
    and then, who keeps the friends????
    :(

    T
     
  2. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

    Country:
    United States
    Joined:
    Mar 21, 2001
    Messages:
    69,983
    Likes Received:
    3,978
    Gender:
    Male
    Occupation:
    BUSINESS owner
    Location:
    Da~WINDY*CITY //CHICAGO
    Ratings:
    +4,178
    TROUBLESHOOTER

    ONE'S HEART IS CRASH
    YET THE SOUL SEEM AT LOST
    DA MIND HIDES TRUTH
    NOW THE POWER OF LOVE
    CONTROLS ..........LOOK INSIDE
    YA ANSWER IZ THERE ONLY THERE
    U SHELL FINE YA ANSWER..........
    WELL DONE POET! NICE PIECE OF ART U DISPLAYED
    SURELY WE BREAK OFF AT TYMES YET TO FINE SELF
    AND TOGETHER AGAIN IN A NEW LOVE
    IT'S HARD TO MOVE ON BUT WE MUST
    FACE THE WAR AND WIN DA BATTLE
    WIT SMILES AND KEEP MOVIN IN PRAYER

    ((LOOK INTO Da MIRROR))
     
  3. MADDRAPPER

    MADDRAPPER Well-Known Member MEMBER

    Joined:
    Apr 1, 2001
    Messages:
    2,093
    Likes Received:
    7
    Ratings:
    +7
    nice piece kid

    THIS WAS DEFINITELY A NICE PIECE KEEP ON REPPING FOR REAL

    hard to move on and get a groove on we've loved too long the bond grew too strong baby boo come home I'm alone
     
  4. Da Street So'ja

    Da Street So'ja Banned MEMBER

    Joined:
    Jun 11, 2001
    Messages:
    7,648
    Likes Received:
    40
    Occupation:
    thrivin' spiritually/physically/emotionally/financ
    Location:
    where failure is not an option
    Ratings:
    +42
    T

    felt the angle all the way on this one dun

    yes yes


    <DSS>
    -------------------------------
    don't me - hate my environment
     
  5. LISTERSCRIBIN'

    LISTERSCRIBIN' Well-Known Member MEMBER

    Joined:
    Mar 17, 2001
    Messages:
    1,264
    Likes Received:
    9
    Occupation:
    artist
    Location:
    where the sugar is in the land
    Ratings:
    +9
    i'm lovin' this sweet melancholy piece...you've said what i feel, even now after all this tyme. i thank you for this piece, t. you must remember that yo poetry is therapy. keep on scribin', i'm watchin'.


    ~~~inkdrops~~~
     
Loading...