Black Poetry : Playa's Game

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by Desert Storm, Apr 11, 2001.

  1. Desert Storm

    Desert Storm Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    It's a shame
    The way you stay so well rounded in this trend

    It's amazing
    How you spend all your time manipulating

    Then prance on the innocent ones
    And make lies and mockery out of the strong and turn them to dust

    Construing and violating you tresspass
    You treat crystals,diamonds,ruby's,and pearls

    And break their delicate nature
    As if they were glass

    You destroy and rob the wealthy at heart
    Unaware
    This violent temper and rage
    Has so evenly built up

    And all I can see
    Is how I have been neglected in so many ways

    Looking out through somebody's shadow
    I guard my heart and hold on to it
    In leasure time I nurture it

    And when it gets a chance to breathe
    Recieve the pleasure
    That your status concieves

    I believe that they torture
    Ignore and murder
    Every little morsal of life

    I plot of up in strife

    And I feel my essence go
    And don't know why you find enjoyment
    In wounding the tender part

    The most sensitive part of my soul
    Your consistent ways
    Grow so very old

    And angry
    When I meet up
    With the wrong kind

    Grown men
    With such childish minds

    Claim to be the big men
    Who know so much about nothing

    You look so good from the outside looking in
    But looking out

    Your world and sense of sick humor
    Has developed like an unhealing scab

    You insist
    You get only the best

    But my intuition says
    Another negative flesh

    I refuse to let you in my click
    Getin all caught up
    In your drama

    Excuses
    And I refuse to let you control me
    In anyway

    I refuse to let you show me "a better way"
    Playa's game

    So demoralizing
    Yet enchanting
    Senthesizing

    For all the ladies involved with that nature
    I stongly warn you

    That the truth comes to the light
    Reaching in depth
    That the naked eyes can't see

    Up close

    Is it that

    It's playaz game

    Desert Storm
     
  2. Amun-Ra

    Amun-Ra Well-Known Member MEMBER

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  3. Desert Storm

    Desert Storm Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thanks!

    Yeah,you notice so many things...that I think other's don't notice...it's amazing. I am so encouraged that you give me truthful answers so I know what I need to improve on. THanks so much. Yeah,wrote a whole poem that basically said the same things and then lost it and ended writing this one and kinda lost where I was going. But thanks,anways..
    Desert Storm
     
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    This Is Real

    And Ever So True
     
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    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    on point enjoyed the flow...
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    what a nice beat u crafted here i hear ya !
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Not a web that any want to get tangled in, but many have. Tight drop.
     
  8. BlatinaPoet4u

    BlatinaPoet4u Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Tyte flow my fellow poet!! Keep flowin ur flows!! :heart:
     
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