Black Poetry : Play Me A Rainstorm

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  1. LyrikalShe

    LyrikalShe Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    play
    for me
    a rainstorm
    to bring to me
    sweet repose on those
    insomniac nights when
    he creeps in on memories
    and takes from me the only vise
    that's proven to give me peace from him
    let the lightning crash in the skies
    let me hear the thunder roll
    sing rainsongs to my heart
    comfort my poor soul
    i'm begging you
    please let the
    rainstorm
    play

    c. 2002 Brandi N. Rainey
    All rights reserved
     
  2. Dream Weaver

    Dream Weaver Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Love the visuals, Excellent!


    I'm just sayin...
     
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    play you
    a rainstorm
    you ask

    alas...
    the lightning claps
    thunder gives aplause
    as the rainfall cleanse yesterday's memory
    of its last vestiges of sadness
    let a gentle breeze wash over you
    as morning's dew moisten the brittle edges of heartache
    for love's sake
    hear the symphony of soft pelts
    drumming
    on heart felt moments of yesteryear
    to soothe the fear of
    what could be
    whenever you think of me.:)

    hear the rainstorm of yesternight
    that tomorrow might be made...alright.

    aiight.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    rainstorm of last flood
    into the days cannon mood
    as ya mind caressed into
    a misty maze and today
    shine where ya eyes now dry
    beauty cover da skies
    rainstorm playin'
    a rapture of love
    a comfort of better hope
    where sweeter pride reside
    let da rainstorm roll
     
  5. Euphoria

    Euphoria Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I love the title.
    Likin this original setup too.
    Nice work.

    *Emma*
     
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    i really liked this cause i love rainstorms. it's something that's so comforting in the sound of rain and thunder to me. this was tyte. keep it up!
     
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    applause applause!!!
    eye catching from the title
    and held on to the last.
    Peace to you, Poet(s).
     
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    STORMY WEATHER

    Artisitic rendering of love gone bad- Smoking!

    1poetsought ~
     
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    the ponding pitter-patter of past predispositions
    paste my pillow
    as a flow of h2O covers my window from a distance
    you came
    then left
    with my full resistance
    as the earths renewal remind me of your kisses

    peace
    khari
     
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    blakverb Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    This is lovely. Rain is passion, from the touch to the sound of it dancing off the ground and windowpanes. The visual set up of the words drew me in 'til I felt and heard each drop.

    10
     
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