Black Poetry : Platonic sex pt. 1

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  1. twision

    twision Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Platonic sex pt. 1

    Her words grabbed my soul
    Now my intellect is aroused
    Letting her words gnaw at my convictions
    Waiting
    Hoping
    For her to free another sentence from her gorgeous lips
    I speak to her soul and her eyes fill
    Waiting
    Hoping
    For me to caress her insecurities with truth
    I unclothe my mind as does she
    Naked, our souls kiss
    Her heartbeat increases as I open my mouth and orally stimulate
    For hours
    For days
    Marking my territory....(whose is it baby?)
    Then I penetrate her emotions
    So deep I touch bottom
    Her moans suggests she feels every part of me
    We finish and I hold her soul in mine
    Forever intertwined as one
     
  2. SeXiAzzMahMi

    SeXiAzzMahMi Banned

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    i really like this poet...

    Thank u for sharing
    Sam
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    welcome welcome welcome !!!

    wow! welcome to destee.com poetic playground
    welcome to the family of love & peace
    this was tyte flowin' and well felt scribe
    happy u here to share and embrace :)
    :wave: :wave: :wave: :wave: :wave:
     
  4. blaquebutterfli

    blaquebutterfli Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    WOW! This was beautiful!
     
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    Your words just touch me
    In every little crevice of my soul
    And turn hard cold bitterness
    Into sweet warm passion
     
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    welcome to da fam dude...
    this was tyte
    hope to see more
    of da metaphors
    peace
    khasm
     
  7. Randee

    Randee Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    What a beautiful way to join the family. This was filled with so much depth.

    "Marking my territory....(whose is it baby?) "

    You marked your territory. . .(its all yours daddy)
     
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    feelin this....
    you gettin deep on these ladies, man.....
    drop it on 'em hard....you know how we do kiko....

    one love and welcome to destee!!!
     
  9. triniti424

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    Welcome twision :)

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    aiight now that welcomes are out of the way...
    this one had me flowin when u started and :jawdrop: in the end lol hope to read more :)
     
  10. angelicsage

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    Welcome...........................

    This was completely of the "Richtor Scale".............Rumbling like an Earthquake with Hot flowing lava poetic passion all over
    my mental canvas..................This was "HOT":flamet:

    I will definitely be looking for more of your work!
     
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