Black Poetry : Plate Full of iSht

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by Randee, Jan 13, 2004.

  1. Randee

    Randee Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    i'm not trying to hold back anymore
    this is who i am
    and this is who you wanted
    so, why do you purposely say things
    to make me trip
    i hate when i feel my levels rise and flip
    why you utilize my last bit of patience
    like this right here is a joke
    everything we are to eachother
    everything we have always been to ourselves
    come crashing into our shore
    attempting to disrupt our life
    situations come to a head on their own
    stop popping them prematurely
    and they won't blister and scar
    stop trying to adjust my vision to yours
    i love who i am and who you are
    but currently we're dealing with a whole lot
    not a mess or stress but life
    and the way we made it together
    so, why now tell me eight half truths
    which equal nothing but eight festering lies
    if you can't tell me the truth about it
    must be f$%ked up, say nothing at all
    i'm full of eating ****
    so stop feeding me these blatant lies
    if you want to try someone else
    go ahead and do that
    but remember where you lay that head comfortable at
    cuz memories all you gonna have
    of all we coulda been
    i know i am spitting mad isht right now
    but its how weve always been
    i've never come half dhonest
    saying things just to start emotions flooding in
    i have so much on my plate
    that there isn't room for more
    if you need to keep doing this to me
    please, just walk out the door
    i'd rather be alone then
    a fool full of you.
     
  2. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    well felt indeed this here tells a story within
    time to stop da lies in it's tracks......tyte
     
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    triniti424 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    WOW sista...I feel your words...scribe on :grouphug:
     
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    way to cleanse your system, sister. this is tight and reeks of mad self-esteem. much love to you
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    You let those emotions out here...well, I guess he shouldn't let the doorknob hit him....
     
  6. true love

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    I loved the way you just spit the truth, you'd rather be alone than put up with the isht! i got it loud and clear and i feel you on this one. much love to you!
     
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    Randee,
    Poetic and Straight Up. Got your point across.
    Left no room for doubts about where you (one in the poem) is seeking to go and is letting the listener ( in the poem) know.

    Peace and Blessings
     
  8. Randee

    Randee Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Rich - You right, now is not the time for lies, if there ever is a time
    Triniti - always feeling you too.
    Gempis - easier to write than act, but i let him have it last night, i am not going to be upset cause he knows me and my every button. Now is not the time.
    Watzinaname - yeah, i gottas watch it with my mouth sometimes though, my heart doesn't want hime to leave.
    True love - truth is the only way to spit otherwise you slobber (LOL)
    rasheed - yeah, beleive he heard it too.

    Thanks EVERYONE for responsing. much love and blessings!
     
  9. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    nice drop i hear you
    emotions flowin
    time to be true
    no more lies...
    likes this write
    :angel1:
     
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