Black Poetry : planetarium dreaming

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  1. Derrick Jay

    Derrick Jay Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    my mind wanders with the moons imagination
    drifting past sun drenched rays of hope deferred
    the lines are blurred
    focusing on tomorrow fanticizing clock ticks
    i trip over todays epiphany awakening the sleeping naysayers
    bumped right into saturn's ring
    then recoiled from what that brotha said in front of me
    my freefall was not intentional
    ****** don't know how to let you just fly
    i fought with the might of icarus
    but my wax was thin and the feathers frail
    they stood around to report the news though
    "did you see what happened?"
    then mars' lap opened to my soul
    let loose the asteroid map and guided me
    i flew right past the dissenters
    smiling at their obvious disgust
    once more gathered in mass numbers
    they pooled negativity for one final stab
    sparkling stars babysat my budding magnificence
    as their dismay was caught up in the ozone
    then rage became curiosity as they watched me
    wondering how i can be so free
    while they park starships in misery
    if you want to follow the gateway constellation
    i extend my forgiving hand and lend you its secrets
    all you have to do is...imagine
     
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    GQ Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    DJ...

    I see you're back with a vengeance...

    Nice read brotha!! Welcome back!!!

    :peace:
    GQ
     
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    Great read Derrick Jay!!

    :) N2
     
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