Quiet Poetry Lounge : Plain Song

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by soulful2006, May 9, 2005.

  1. soulful2006

    soulful2006 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I don't know how to be flashy about this so i won't
    I love you I have since I 've known you
    I've desired to grow with you in your life
    You gave me my first inspiration to
    speak out the truth that had
    always been here
    I give you no fantastic melody
    I could sing it out in twelve different keys
    I won't because all of that wouldn't add athing
    That you can't feel coming from within me
    I'll just tell it like it is and try to be the
    best lover and friend that you have ever known
    Try to be as pure to you as gold
    Plain as day I can only say
    You gave me everything
    and then the rest
    nothing short of your personal best
    FORGET ALL THE REST
    I have the very best Lady love could offer me
    :heart: :love:
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    very nicely done
     
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    1poetsought Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Soulful to the max!

    Congrats! :welldone:
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    uppin the song of da day .....enjoyed the re-read
     
  5. soulful2006

    soulful2006 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thank you for readin this again I'm glad that you can get on with reading my work more than once.
     
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