Quiet Poetry Lounge : Plagued

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by mrmofi, May 13, 2008.

  1. mrmofi

    mrmofi Member MEMBER

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    My Flow is Fulla jabs, uppercuts, and left hooks...
    Its like im playin life in Chess with just rooks..
    and I can sautee better than the best cooks
    when im cookin up hot verses an def hooks look!
    text books cant Teach Ya like the Preacher
    how to Speak The Feature-Ether
    so not even the Sun can Reach Ya
    and The One is not a leech, I don’t beg- I strive.
    Anything I make is a Creature and It will eat and survive.
    So the beat is alive,
    with a brain and a heart,
    and im the soul, that’s my role, im just playin my part.
    And Im cursed to reherse till my verses traverse
    I will thirst till im first universes will burst!
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    flow on ya hooks and twist leave curves lyrical
     
  3. watzinaname

    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Enjoyed the way one line just flowed effortlessly into the next here.
     
  4. Bluewater

    Bluewater Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Hi.mrmofi
    You have a lot of energy in your flow
    Nice drive.
    Keep bringing it

    Peace~N~Love
     
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    PLATINUMILLITY1 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Straightforward
    I am onard
    Learn life like Strife
    Make Big ya Digs
    Digs into the dirt of the matter
    Find great and record what I'm after
    Understand
    I'm going for the grand Slam
    Dunking Best Counts
    Like not even a man Can
    I am a wonder
    Came from under now I'm out
    Just as the Birds Fly
    I'm going South
    Not for the Winter
    Just to be a Winner
    Make it Half Way
    Then Drive into the Days
    Doctrinate
    Making State
    No Fake
    It's Just my simple Fate
    I make
    Straight
    Forward
     
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