Black Poetry : Placin My Face In Da Space...

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  1. NICELOCKS820

    NICELOCKS820 Member MEMBER

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    PLACIN MY FACE IN DA SPACE...

    sumtime..
    id like to place my face in the space where the cool winds blow.
    long before the ghetto made the hearts of my people hollow.
    at the time when the rhyme made most learned men follow...
    but instead we go...
    towards the things that are not good for us.
    why cant we truss
    HIM
    and bust thru bars and conquer constellations?
    manifestations
    one mo gen of my brown elevation floetry creations....
    see what we facin
    is sho nuff defeat,
    if we choose to repeat
    the mistakes that the old ones made.
    FADE.
    INTO BLACKNESS
    AND LETS CRACK THIS
    WHOLE PLANNED MIND CONTROL.
    the HOLE planned mind control
    that made us sell souls...
    and get lower
    and
    lower.
    SOOOOOO
    SHOWER.
    U AND ME WIT positivI tee...
    queens and kings..
    i beg u jus try see..
    who u really are
    and what u can really do
    WHO YOU?
    who knew?
    what hidden talents u possess?
    WELL I DID
    THATS WHY I HID
    THIS LESSON IN THE FORM OF VERSE.
    SO PLEEZE PEEPS.
    TAKE MY HAND AND COME WIT ME.
    and place YO face
    in the space
    where the cool winds blow
    and learn to follow
    the RITE row...
    EY YO@!
    ACK LIKE U KNOW.......
    THAT OUR SOULS REALLY AINT HOLLOW.


    PEACE BRUHS AND SISSES
    FRUM PHILLY.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    well felt poet!!
    vibe on and speak from da soul
     
  3. k0k0

    k0k0 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    everybody speakin on another level tonite

    flow on
     
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