Black Poetry : Place

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by Poetrymama, Oct 29, 2006.

  1. Poetrymama

    Poetrymama Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I was in a place and time with
    rhythm and rhyme
    felt I belong with the verses spoke
    just felt the flow, you know

    I could spit and spat cause
    with them I knew where it was at
    but illusions are really just illusionary
    thrills of the mind state

    years went by with pain and shame
    feeling love which was not felt the same
    Yes, Love, Love , Love
    Not Sexual
    but mutual poetic attraction of the mind
    People of my race
    people of my kind
    so I thought
    but reality is a mug

    Hate is strong
    but I remained in Jesus' loving arms as I walked
    away that day without strength to bear
    without the group I throught would always care
    Tears from the soul fell so heavily from this spirit
    with faith in Jesus He showed me deliverance

    One day I came on line after not being on for days
    heard a poem which changed my way of thinking of old
    for I realized all souls are precious for Jesus will hold them
    whether they want him or not
    close to his bosom relieving pain and straife

    This place is Precious in which I learned
    compassion and love is given not earned
    FREELY to others as He gave from his birth
    to the cross as He stood strong resurrected
    for He was borned to sacifice and Love regardly
    of the circumstances
    So shall I in this magical place......... My Heart
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    yes indeed honey hold it close as i am ...love this poetrymama
     
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    So precious to find the love of Jesus in your heart. Never know what will take you to that place. Enjoyed your flow.
     
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    Tha-Emissary Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Yes, Jesus is in the heart and with him we can have a beat that never plays out in our lifetime. You gone preacher!
     
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