Quiet Poetry Lounge : Pink Pages

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by divine_1, Dec 1, 2003.

  1. divine_1

    divine_1 Active Member MEMBER

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    Lovely pink pages filled with deceit
    Rose scented pastel paper lying to me
    Cuz everything is perfect
    Everything is sweet
    And I’m disappointed cuz
    This is what I believe
    I poured all my faith into these pages
    Stained them with my stress
    Covered them with my tears and
    Trusted them with my ultimate fears
    And they turned their backs on me
    Giving me gifts of writers block
    So poetry becomes a mystery
    My expression is faltered
    And I can’t breathe
    The cause of my death
    Is a lack of poetry.
     
  2. Bluewater

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    this was nice
    release itin the flow
    keep scribing
    Peace
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    whoaaaaa!!
    flow on release and let it out
    tyte drop
     
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    Pharaoh Jahil Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Peace.


    WOW, Divine_1, Im going to be looking forward to more of your poetry. Don't hold back, let it all out threw your pen.
     
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    never have i heard writer's block posed so elegantly. big big ups for this, my friend.
     
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    divine_1 Active Member MEMBER

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    Bluewater~ My elder sister, your flow is always crystal clear... Thanks 4 tha love

    Rich~ my brotha, thanks 4 tha advice- on time as always!

    Pharoh Jah~ He who speakz tha truth, my Peace-brotha, such kind wordz

    Gempis~ A tru gem, so precious, so rare, so powerful. thankz

    Yall make writin my wirtez and freesytlin on the destee boardz worthwile......

    UNCONDITIONAL LOVE, THANKZ and RESPECT 2 U ALL!!!
     
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