Black Poetry : PINK ELEPHANTS

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by MORE, Sep 26, 2003.

  1. MORE

    MORE Banned MEMBER

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    i don't wanna go outside
    don't wanna see daylight
    i just wanna drank dis here Remy
    till i see pink
    Elephants

    i don't wanna meet nobody new
    can't, cause im still in lovin' you'
    rather sit in the middle of my flo'
    with my drawers on' in the
    zone

    wish i could take this puzzle
    and figure it the fugg out
    get rid of the conflict that is
    keepin us apart
    dear heart

    don't care who right or wrong
    just wanna hold u in ma arms
    another shot to my dome
    This remy warms my soul.

    i dun cried to God and cried to the walls
    cried in the shower, in the hours
    cried in my car on my way to work
    dayum u did me wrong
    dayum it really hurts

    but what imma do?
    go to somebody else and have
    new bull'ish to sort out on
    the shelf!

    C'MON NOW BABY IM GOING CRAZY
    LETS FORGIVE AND FORGET
    I CAN'T HANDLE THIS MESS
    BY MYSELF!
    IM LONELY AS FUGG, AND LONELY FOR WHAT
    CAUSE TWO HEARTS , TOO STUBBORN
    TO MAKE MORE WAR THAN LOVE??

    got this sucka on the phone
    dun told him to let me alone
    im going thru some drama and
    aint got no time to be opening up

    baby, before i finish this here
    Remy, please tell me, you'll come back to me
    back to me
    please,
    lets work this out......
     
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    word sis...
    i feel that....
    i hope things turn out for the best...
    pride is a b**** though
    peace
    khasm
     
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    nice flow....
    love is hard..enjoy the read
     
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    yes u will over come the shadows
    it can be rough & tough in life like dis
     
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    Don't go back MORE. Can't you see, what that love has done to thee. Taken all your best, left you with the rest. Sadness. Drink your Remy. Take a nap. Wake up feeling new. Find someone to share your life. Live the life your due. The pain doesn't go away fast, it dosn't leave you soon. The pain is real. Don't feel guilty or worry any more about the cause. But you can't give up like this. You have too much love to share. To many things you'll miss. Another will take away the pain of lovers kiss.

    " dayum u did me wrong
    dayum it really hurts "

    Yes he did you wrong. Don't dwell to long. Dance with the memories. Drink with the times. But never give up your sweetness.

    " wish i could take this puzzle "

    If all the pieces are gone you can't put the puzzle back together. Even if you did you still would need answers. Tell us you will be Ok. That you will brighten some how some way. The strength is in you.
     
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