Black Poetry : Pimps Show U Thangs That Terrify Ur Brain

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  1. Tantrum

    Tantrum Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    My smile stimulates ur brain
    Calculate digits this is what its worth
    Have you standing on that corner
    Im gone make you work
    I dont care about your household problems
    You gone push my work/Even if your feet hurt
    You gone push my work or until the sun comes out
    Which ever come first
    Knock your shoes off your feet
    Put your head in the dirt
    I put your mans head in a herse
    Nikes and white tees
    Flip your body/Smash brains in the turf
    Now get my money
    I can show you thangs that are worse
    You flirting with death
    Yet you dont know how bad it hurts
    Too see my daughter in these streets
    She was just like you
    She was so foolish
    Wit her body didnt know what to do
    So I say terrifing things like this
    To let you know/That a pimp
    Only wants you for this
    Your brains dont mean nothing
    Unless its some brain that he gets
    I tried to teach my daughter all of this
    So when you think that he loves you
    Just because he sits back and rubs you
    So you sitback and he hugs you
    Think back to my daughter
    Cause the way he loves you and hugs you
    Is the same reason my daughter died
    Thinking a man would be there all the time
    Same time manipulating her brain
    Making her think fast money
    Was the only way to maintain
    Im gone tell you one more thing
    Thats the real reason that doves cry
    Im not a pimp im just a dad on a mission
    With a soul commitment to others souls
    Uplifted how gifted....

    Sincerly,
    Your Guardian Angel!!!
     
  2. queentswana

    queentswana Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Now this is what's up, I liked the flow...I felt a sense of understanding in this...awesome piece Tantrum...^5
     
  3. Sweet baby_face

    Sweet baby_face Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I likes....
    love yr view on this.
     
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    skrybble7 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    This is raw, deep, and real.
    Go ahead and bring the truth to the reader.
    One love
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    the beauty of this speaks out
    how ya gifted love spreads like
    a dad for the mental head wit
    realism truth .........flow on Tan.
     
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    thatgirl74 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Wow Tantrum your words as something else I like how you worked this piece.
    Flo on Bro
     
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    this is a diffrent side from u tantrum...
    i enjoyed the flow spilled....

    one love
    khasm
     
  8. GHETTOAMBITION

    GHETTOAMBITION Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    THAT WAS DEEP AND TRUE, I SEEN AND MET PEOPLE LIKE DAT, AND I DO PRAY 4 DEM, BUT I WAS FEELIN THAT CUZ DATZ HOW I FEEL BOUT PLP, BUT KEEP IT REAL MY BRATHA AND PLP WILL KNO DA DEAL

    BLACKLUV AND BP
     
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    wow is all i can say at this point tant just wow.:smooch: :welldone:
     
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