Black Poetry : Pimping Me

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  1. karma55

    karma55 Active Member MEMBER

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    Trick

    I guess he thinks this sh*ts a game,
    And I guess he thinks it’ll bring him fame,
    To bring shame to my name
    Cause even when I thought the facts were plan
    He had his own opinion
    On his own mission to see how much he could pimp me
    But truthfully a pimp aint much of a man
    If he feels he needs to trick me
    The thought of this sh*t is sickening
    I guess I was the fool to think he could respect me
    Made it his duty to correct me
    Calling me his h*e
    But, see that doesn’t really matter
    Cause he’s got plenty more just knocking at his door
    So what does he need me for?
    And I bet if he heard this he’d be laughing his a** off
    Because that’s how funny he thinks it is
    And surprisingly I agree
    But the humor lies in the fact that I could take the time
    To write these lines
    Cause it shouldn’t mean that much to me
    But I guess its safe to say hurt me
    And I feel like he did it purposely
    Left me feeling worthlessly
    And although I understood that we could never be lovers,
    Just f***ers,
    And during the good times we’d cuddle
    I still can’t understand how he could hurt a girl
    Just cause he didn’t love her
    Or, how I could let hurt me even though I didn’t love him
    But I feel like I gave him something precious
    And in return I got nothing
    So, here I stand empty handed
    While he knows that he will always have apart of me.
    Pride refuses to let me say it,
    But he could have had the heart of me
    I guess he got what he wanted when we first started out
    When we were to busy doing,
    Knowing there was sh*t we needed to talk about
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    well expressed from da inner soul
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Nobody wants to be used, even if you don't love someone, you expect to be respected. Your words were piercing, potently posed piece.
     
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