Black Poetry : Pillow Talk

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  1. GYPSYMAN

    GYPSYMAN Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    In melancholy
    vocals
    accented
    by

    "no sleep"

    she
    slid
    between
    my
    sheets
    and
    spilled
    her
    lies
    on
    my
    shoulder...

    My
    back
    muscles
    tensed
    as she
    began
    to
    kiss

    her
    way

    D

    O

    W

    N

    I put
    ALL
    accusations
    on
    hold
    and
    she

    grew
    bold

    sold on
    the thought
    she was
    free....

    guess
    she assumed
    she
    wouldn't
    have to
    choose

    between

    that

    other bruthu'

    and

    me...

    SO


    I let her
    apologize

    with

    body
    hands
    and
    mouth

    then

    as soon
    as
    she
    finished

    I
    kicked
    her

    ***

    out.



    On A Continuous Journey
    GYPSYMAN
     
  2. poeticdelight

    poeticdelight Member MEMBER

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    Wuuuuuuuuuuuu!!!

    :lol: i heard that :lol:

    pd
     
  3. Da Street So'ja

    Da Street So'ja Banned MEMBER

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    ****

    Gypsy you raw i like this part:

    spilled
    her
    lies
    on
    my
    shoulder...

    dawg unfortunately it has to go down like that sometime.

    DSSNY - big up to Big D
     
  4. GYPSYMAN

    GYPSYMAN Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    PD...SO'JA

    Yo Fellas..
    This was more of a comedy piece 4 me...you know- looking back in the past remembering past incidents and relationships that never quite got off a certain level...I can laugh now at alot of shhh...even the ones where I ended up on the phucked up side of the street....I guess we all can look back and see our growth
    .....and hopefully laugh.

    peace

    and
    ONE

    G-MAN
     
  5. cocobutterskyn

    cocobutterskyn Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    WOW! GYPSY

    Its title attracted me(1 of my favorite movies) However it wasn't anything like it:D

    It is kinda funny. I was surprised of it's ending. Did you give her cab fare/Jitney money? Or did she do the high steppin?:D

    Nice flow.

    MadLove:heart: Coco
     
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    alyce Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    can I tell you

    how chilly this piece is???????? And rightly so, my brutha. Deceptions can most definitely be found beneath the headboard when a conniving sista insults the thinking brutha by using the pleasures of her body ~ not respecting (or UNDERSTANDING) the strength of his mind... happens allatime!

    Speak about the real thangs!!!!!!!! LOVE IT!

    a
     
  7. MsDLite

    MsDLite Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    ...i see

    ...too often we do and say
    what we want when we want
    something that will benefit
    ourselves...
    as we think that we
    have someone under our
    spell...

    keep us informed~
     
  8. blakverb

    blakverb Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Bro this is ill! Man, hey if you gone do it I guess that is the way it needs to be done...scratch that, that IS THE WAY IT NEEDS TO BE DONE :D (I'm buggin don't mind me this piece just has me trippin' cause I've been here before)

    blak
     
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    N2urSoul Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Gypsy~

    Whooaaa NELLY! :D Hey brotha ... who don' went & pissed you off! :lol:
    Nah ~ but, on the real .... seriously .... all jokes aside ~~

    THIS **** IS TIGHT .... WOWWWWWWW!!

    .... oh well, she shouldn'ta neva lied to my G-Man, then she wouldn'ta had to worry bout gettin' da boot! :lol:

    SUPERFANTASTICALLY TIGHT my love ... and well written ~ I'm feelin' it - all ova da place.... :wink:


    Madd :heart:
     
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