Black Poetry : Pillow Talk

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by Chastity, Dec 28, 2003.

  1. Chastity

    Chastity Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    We share pillows,
    We share covers,
    We share thoughts,
    About possible feelings for each other.
    I assume the position as your partner,
    If only for that moment…
    It was a feeling I could never forget.
    I listen intently as you release,
    As you let out your inner most,
    Whispering so that only I hear.
    I still question though,
    If those words drenched in sweet,
    That you speak display your heart revealed,
    Or are you speaking out of your fatigue?
    I whisper one more line,
    But there isn’t a response this time.
    I look over and behold your visage,
    Eyes that once smiled at me,
    Closed ever so gently.
    Silent now are your lips,
    Inviting mine to lightly,
    Kiss them good nightly.
    I wait awhile before I take my flight,
    From my spot I quietly slither away,
    The same spot that you will find empty,
    When you roll over upon the coming day.
     
  2. PositiveMindset

    PositiveMindset Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Yes, pillow talk sounds nice 2 the ears, but sometimes it's poison 2 the heart.

    Very nice piece, here.
     
  3. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    pillow talk of sweetness this sleeps in a heart
     
  4. MzBlkAngel

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    nice drop...
    pillow talk
    sweet vibes....Angel
     
  5. BaduX

    BaduX Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Oooh how i love this
    most of all the endin
    MUCH LOVE
    GOD BLESS :angel1:
     
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    wonderful flow ....pillow talk....very nice
    Peace
    Blue :heart:
     
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    Usually pillow talk brings two closer together, if they are both aware of what's being said...liked this piece.
     
  8. LeRoy

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    Chasity, liked this piece. I love your creativity.
    Keep writing and I'll keep reading
     
  9. Mawelulu1Luv

    Mawelulu1Luv Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    The intricacies of sincere & passionate love make perplexing pillow talk...

    I felt this PEACE
    Write On!
     
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