Black Poetry : Piece of my Soul

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  1. Defiantson

    Defiantson Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Piece of my Soul

    I offered you my heart
    And everything that love inhaled.
    I put you on a pet-a-stool
    And treated you like a queen.
    I gave you something
    That I never gave before.
    By giving you a piece of my soul.
    But what did you do with it?
    See, I gave you my life
    And in return you stepped on my heart.
    You hurt me like
    I’ve never been hurt before
    See, I’ve cried and cried
    But now I cry without tears.
    All because I gave you a piece of my soul.
    But love don’t worry,
    I’ll be okay
    Just do me a favor and beware
    Cause someone might do you
    Like you did me
    And I’m sorry to say
    When that happens
    Please, don’t come back
    Crawling to me
    I wish you happiness
    Cause all you where to me
    Was some emotional test
    God Bless,
    And I hope you fix your emotional mess
    And with this ring
    I wish you the best.
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  2. Defiantson

    Defiantson Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    We all have ventured on this road
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    so true at some point , well said
     
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    Memories still flashing back today.
     
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    Defiantson Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    yeah they do but we all have to move on.
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    We do have to move on, but when we are in that place, the emotions are hard to face. Deeply written and quite felt poet.
     
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    BrownEyed Girly Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Much love to you...and yes Karma is a b#$&%!!! What comes around goes around each and every time!
     
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    Defiantson Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Trust, she felt every bit of it too. That piece was write about my ex-wife.
     
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    this was like reading a page of my last chapter wheeew......
     
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    queentswana Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    And still ...we rise

    Who wants to hear, "Its better to have loved and lost, then never have loved at all"?....at the time of losing someone you love?
    To cry sometimes is healthy, to cry without tears...is simply growth. If something was learned or gained by a lost...then all wasnt' completely lost.
    And when "Queen-ness" presents herself, her "King" shall appear.
    nice piece poet, thanks
     
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