Black Poetry : Piece of my Soul (dedication to my ex-wife)

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  1. Defiantson

    Defiantson Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Piece of my Soul

    I offered you my heart
    And everything that love inhaled.
    I put you on a pet-a-stool
    And treated you like a queen.
    I gave you something
    That I never gave before.
    By giving you a piece of my soul.
    But what did you do with it?
    See, I gave you my life
    And in return you stepped on my heart.
    You hurt me like
    I’ve never been hurt before
    See, I’ve cried and cried
    But now I cry without tears.
    All because I gave you a piece of my soul.
    But love don’t worry,
    I’ll be okay
    Just do me a favor and beware
    Cause someone might do you
    Like you did me
    And I’m sorry to say
    When that happens
    Please, don’t come back
    Crawling to me
    I wish you happiness
    Cause all you where to me
    Was some emotional test
    God Bless,
    And I hope you fix your emotional mess
    And with this ring
    I wish you the best.


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  2. nevar

    nevar Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    man papi i love this emotional piece you've written. tears streaming down my face now) love it truly. flo on defiantson.:love:
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    feeling this here deeply .......u expressed it well what a dedication
     
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    GHETTOAMBITION Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    ooooooweeeeeee
    dat was on the real
    i mean u straight tellin her
    u go boi
    dat was real
    tight flo
    so flo on
    i was feelin it no doubt

    blackluv and bp
     
  5. Defiantson

    Defiantson Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Hey sometimes you just got to say exactly how they made you feel. This piece was writen like 5 years ago. Still love it though.....
     
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