Black Poetry : picture that*

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  1. thepoetsean

    thepoetsean Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    (off the dome)

    picture that with a kodak
    my temple of
    physical mental spiritual
    edification--

    AN EXPERIMENT!

    a controlled environment--
    populated by a select few--
    all after the same purpose...
    picture that with
    a leica or a kodak cam--

    black and white film--
    the world
    tries diggin in my chest for real--
    i just
    lower my aperature
    increase my depth of field--
    now my focal length is sharp--
    seeing the world outside this--
    fisheye lens of deceit

    picture that with a kalimar
    black me
    in the twenty--first
    centu-ry
    quasi-free...

    i figure 400 years @ 100 percent interest--
    everyone owes me the world...
    that's why i walk around the way i do--
    that's why i might intimidate the
    life out of you--
    because you owe--
    me--
    picture that
    with a leica or a kodak--
    in black and white--
    sharp as razor rain.

    (reparationsnow!theyoweusandtheywillpay!)
     
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    Reason Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Did You Say...

    That was a freestyle?!? DiZzAm! Too tight!

    Much Respect
    Reas
     
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    thepoetsean Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thanx reas...

    mostly everything i write i do it off the dome...destee just gimme dat warm tinglee feelin'!

    sean
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    POET! POET! POET!

    This piece is tyte.
    Thanks for sharing
    what's in your dome
    Holla!:)
     
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    thepoetsean Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    from the heart to the type

    thanx for appreciated what my dome leaked...


    sean
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    thepoetsean Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    when i think of you*

    truthfully.wholeheartedly.

    when i think of you--
    i feel joy
    somewhere in the center of
    my one point perspective
    just because...
    the thought of you is artistry

    flesh muscle and intelligence loomed
    together with a personality that--
    overshines the worst circumstance--
    outstands the greatest worldly achievement--

    when
    i
    think
    of
    you
    i feel words flash across my head--
    like a running dictionary--
    phrase that describes you speeding--
    at onehundredandninetymilesper
    smile and touch and sarcastic gesture--
    sean grasping for them and
    catching not-a-one
    because--
    while they sped by...
    him thought of only one that might come close to--
    when him thought of you--
    angelic maybe?
    no.
    unearthly...no.but close.

    when i think of you
    i think of
    Y
    O
    U

    and all that you represents.
     
  7. Rashad

    Rashad Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Mmmmmmm...

    Thinking of you
    and the
    things U do
    I too
    want to
    Love you
    for the rest of
    my life
    I'll make you
    my wife
    I strive to
    achieve the
    very best of
    you
    the pain
    in you
    the joy
    in you
    I can take
    care of
    you
    because I love you
    I'm so much in
    Love with you
    that even the Lord
    will tell you
    secretly
    how
    descretly
    I adore you
    my manhood
    is nothing
    without you
    I'll pasify
    my love
    and you can
    suck till
    you've had
    enough
    Your beauty
    touches my
    soul
    and makes
    me whole
    I'm feeling
    you
    please believe
    me
    understand me
    you complete me;)
    It's all Love
    Holla! ( Just mess'n around):D
     
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    N2urSoul Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thepoetsean

    Well looky there! Do your thang dear! I'm lovin' it!

    N2
     
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    thepoetsean Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thank y'all

    I thanx ya kindly and i invite y'all to check the boward for my boi quest and my boi rashad...they're two real talented bruhs.

    sean
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