Black Poetry : Pictue This ( 1st Time Flowin)

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by poeticlyspeakin, May 14, 2003.

  1. poeticlyspeakin

    poeticlyspeakin Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    picture this
    she's 12, standin in front of a crowd of thirty
    legs shakin, all of a sudden she gets madd thirsty
    throats dry, eyes blurry, she doesn't notice faces
    her family screams her name and she wishes she erases
    a moment of silence, she clears her parched throat, the room heats up
    starts to mumble her 1st sentence til someone yells speak up
    she's embarressed, she can feel her face get red
    but doesnt stop, just gets louder, then the 1st stanza's read
    she looks at the back of the room occasionally takin a peak at the page
    all eyes on her, she wants to just stop n run off the stage
    then someone claps to a line in her poetic song
    suddenly she feels confident, secure, and mentally strong
    she stands tall like a tower, looks the people in their eyes
    finishes the 3rd stanza, the hook to her vibe
    she starts makin movements with her hands and flows like there's a beat
    to emphasize the importance while the crowd is on the edge of their seat
    then she says the last word, the people get up on their feet
    she takes a step back, bows down, and says thats the end of her speech
    walks off the stage and sits down, she's officially a poet
    take it book and closes it
    she smiles, that was her 1st time flowin...
     
  2. NDeep

    NDeep Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    "suddenly she feels confident, secure, and mentally strong
    she stands tall like a tower, looks the people in their eyes"

    Feels good....That's why I flow...
    Attention is my favorite dro....

    Keep flowin'
    Cause I will
     
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    Royal_T Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Congrats for overcoming...that's tyte!
     
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    msluciousb Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Sounds familiar...

    Loved it, it's odd that most of us started around the same ages...wow! You made my spirit leap!

    Blessings On ya house!
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    very beautiful vibe of how u made it
     
  6. poeticlyspeakin

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    very nice very nice indeed poet