Black Poetry : Pick Up The Pieces

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  1. SensualReality

    SensualReality Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    If I dropped your heart on the ground and it fell apart
    Could you still live without the sound of my voice and the scent that lingers in your nostrils from the spot where my thighs meet.
    Or would you lose all control of your emotions and harm other hearts as I've done you.
    Only sleeping with women for a nut and slight pleasure.Then taking away all their self worth and dropping their hearts harder than I did your's?


    If I stole from you what you cherished to the depth of your soul.
    Would you let me take another breath or take another step to a place in this world.
    Or would you kill me and everything I am by torturing me and beating out my insides?


    If I lied to or about you
    Would you turn around and do the same?
    Tell everyone that I do all types of dirty things and release all my secrets known to mankind.


    Revenge is so sweet or so you think.
    Fighting is so fun or so you think.


    Letting people get to you is the worst,look back on your sour situations and move on.
    Everything that goes up must come down.
    How else can a frown be a smile turned upside down?
     
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    SwtT Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I really enjoyed your piece:)
     
  3. SensualReality

    SensualReality Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    :grouphug: tanky tanky
     
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    You give us much to think about in this piece. It takes a lot of courage sometimes simply to move on, and strength not to want to get even. Keep those flows coming.
     
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    SensualReality Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    yes ma'am and thanx for the response :book:
     
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    krazelyricks Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    This was mad tyte. Yo, this joint could be turned into a song. Number one hit in fact. Props given.
     
  7. SensualReality

    SensualReality Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Foxi thanx sis but dont blow my already apple head up :wink::lol:
     
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    gempis Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    watz said it - you threw down so much brain fodder in this, lil sister. Woo! I love deep thinkin people and deep thoughts! Mad props.
     
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    SensualReality Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thank You Gempis :wave:
     
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