Black Poetry : PHOTO(MAN)TAGE

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by N2urSoul, Mar 17, 2001.

  1. N2urSoul

    N2urSoul Well-Known Member MEMBER

    Joined:
    Mar 17, 2001
    Messages:
    3,955
    Likes Received:
    1
    Occupation:
    Director, Community Employment Strategies
    Location:
    Minneapolis, MN
    Ratings:
    +1
    Authentic and picturesque
    A form of pictorial beauty
    Genuine as a PHOTO -
    you are....are you?
    Such ambiguity, my uncertainty--this oracular state- I owe you an apology~
    Could it be a portrayal of the YOU that I invision
    but with
    good VALUES, the right TONE, and a very modern TECHNIQUE

    Leave me with an IMPRESSION;
    I need a SNAPSHOT of you...your PROFILE for my file --please

    I can see your POSITIVE uplifting my NEGATIVE~
    adequate insulation from the world that surrounds - outside

    Can I ask you for a LIKENESS - of Candid PHOTOCHROME
    I am influenced by your TINT-TYPE

    Share can we? IMAGERY~ of ARTISTIC love

    love
    love in MOTION
    motion in love
    motion

    Motion picture~ moving FRAME BY FRAME
    ...richly decorated and ornate

    Take part in my PHOTODRAMA; EFFIGY
    is still...
    a still...
    STILL - you are clear~
    ...clearly representation for presentation; a COLOR FILLED TABLEAU

    I need you as my FIGURE, my SILHOUETTE, - MURAL of the man in my STUDIO (life)

    Depict the ILLUSTRATION -
    this PORTRAIT includes US~
    ...I am ARRANGING you, all the while
    DESCRIBING two

    ~IamsofascinatedwiththisPHOTO(MAN)TAGE...

    Come in...my studio is nothing less than
    A FINE ART GALLERY~
    be prepared for the DISPLAY
    I am asking YOU,
    Chiaroscuro
    to be my MOSAIC
     
  2. N2urSoul

    N2urSoul Well-Known Member MEMBER

    Joined:
    Mar 17, 2001
    Messages:
    3,955
    Likes Received:
    1
    Occupation:
    Director, Community Employment Strategies
    Location:
    Minneapolis, MN
    Ratings:
    +1
    Thanks Sherykah - I'm glad you enjoyed reading!
     
  3. GQ

    GQ Well-Known Member MEMBER

    Joined:
    Mar 17, 2001
    Messages:
    2,220
    Likes Received:
    3
    Occupation:
    United States Air Force
    Location:
    South Jersey
    Ratings:
    +3
    N2,

    Love this piece and all its' vividness!!! Well done poetess!!!

    Love & Respect (L&R)
    GQ
     
  4. N2urSoul

    N2urSoul Well-Known Member MEMBER

    Joined:
    Mar 17, 2001
    Messages:
    3,955
    Likes Received:
    1
    Occupation:
    Director, Community Employment Strategies
    Location:
    Minneapolis, MN
    Ratings:
    +1
    THANX -GQ

    If you like it, then I love it!! Thank you for the lift up (uplift)!!
    Stay PoSiTiVe Blackman :)
     
  5. Nita

    Nita Well-Known Member MEMBER

    Country:
    United States
    Joined:
    Feb 9, 2001
    Messages:
    3,096
    Likes Received:
    15
    Occupation:
    youth volunteer
    Location:
    Arkansas
    Ratings:
    +17
    Mmmmm a mental photo,...in deep thought as I
    *visualize*
    Great piece
     
  6. Destee

    Destee destee.com STAFF

    Country:
    United States
    Joined:
    Jan 22, 2001
    Messages:
    34,782
    Likes Received:
    8,982
    Gender:
    Female
    Location:
    betwixt and between
    Ratings:
    +9,680
    agreeing with those before me
    thank you for this picture

    :heart:

    Destee
     
  7. N2urSoul

    N2urSoul Well-Known Member MEMBER

    Joined:
    Mar 17, 2001
    Messages:
    3,955
    Likes Received:
    1
    Occupation:
    Director, Community Employment Strategies
    Location:
    Minneapolis, MN
    Ratings:
    +1
    Destee

    Thanx for stopping by - I'm glad to know that you like the mental collage - !
     
  8. blakverb

    blakverb Well-Known Member MEMBER

    Joined:
    Mar 19, 2001
    Messages:
    2,627
    Likes Received:
    31
    Gender:
    Male
    Ratings:
    +32
    This iz a 2 x 5
    a 5 + 5
    a 2 + 8
    a 10 times itself minus 90
    a mos' def
    "10"
    CLASSIC!

    keep doin' what you do
    blak
     
  9. N2urSoul

    N2urSoul Well-Known Member MEMBER

    Joined:
    Mar 17, 2001
    Messages:
    3,955
    Likes Received:
    1
    Occupation:
    Director, Community Employment Strategies
    Location:
    Minneapolis, MN
    Ratings:
    +1
    Blak~

    Thanx a million for the comps...

    I'll keep writin' only if you keep readin'em!!

    Oh, yea - I will most definitely give you a read in person, if you'd like!!
     
  10. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

    Country:
    United States
    Joined:
    Mar 21, 2001
    Messages:
    69,983
    Likes Received:
    3,977
    Gender:
    Male
    Occupation:
    BUSINESS owner
    Location:
    Da~WINDY*CITY //CHICAGO
    Ratings:
    +4,177
    now this one will blast you indeed i agree with all above