Black Poetry : Phone Conversation...A Dior Robynsonne and PropheticNsyght Collabo

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  1. Dior Robynsonne

    Dior Robynsonne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I

    I never realized how much
    you affect me.
    How you seem to literally sink inside of me.
    Now you're playing havoc with my senses and
    I'm dancing on air.
    How could you possibly be equipped to
    bring me to this ripened stage.
    How could you be the one created to
    take me there...
    to this great beyond?


    *Silence*

    II

    I really can't answer that.
    I mean...it's crazy, but the way I'm feeling about you
    is like...
    Sun-rippened tomatoes and a glass of Arbor Mist...
    Nah, scratch that. How about Dom Perignon 64 in a chilled glass.
    Its crucial!
    I guess you fail to see that you assaulted me with
    some kind of wonderful.
    I can't seem to grasp extremity of this thang, but yo,
    it's all good because i'm the naked man, drowning in your
    amber rain.


    III

    *She thinks*


    Hmmmphf! It sure feels good to burn with
    this fever.
    It feels so good to loose myself in this feeling....to loose myself in
    him. Hmmm God is Good!

    *To Him*​

    Baby,
    what can I say accept I've got to be the Ace of Hearts
    in your deck of cards. Let me be your Royal Flush!
    By the way thank you for liberating me with a sweet downpour of your love.... my poetic prophet.


    *To Her*
    Like I said, it's all gravy.
    God is good and i'm feeling so woozy right now.
    I got you walking through my head, disrupting my thoughts
    and leaving me speechless.
    I mean what can I say?
    As for thanking me for a liberator...it's my pleasure, but let me
    thank you for being my friend and romancipator.
    I'm so caught up in you and the illusion appeals to me so
    who cares if i'm delusional. Just know that what I feel for you right now,
    is genuine and sincere; deep and sheer.
    Baby, I'm in love with you...

    Her: Goodnight Baby.​

    Him: Goodnight Lovechild.​


    The phone call ends....and this is the beginning.

    ~*Copyright
    The Year of the Monkey (2004)
    The 93rd year, 4th month, 15th day
    in conjunction with
    "Earth's Wynne" Publishing
    ~*Dior Robynsonne and ~*PropheticNsyght​
     
  2. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    tyte drop scribe on wit da collabing
     
  3. watzinaname

    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Perhaps the beginning of forever. This was so tight, loved the concept and how it was laid out.
     
  4. PropheticNsyght

    PropheticNsyght Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Watz and Rich I thank you for your love and continuous support. God bless. Of course I could not have done this without my boi, Dior. One love pa and thanks for your creativity.
     
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    krazelyricks Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    This was a lovely conversation. You both work good together. Much luv to the both of you.
     
  6. Khasm13

    Khasm13 STAFF STAFF

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    nice joint...
    i need more phone convo's like this...word
    creative piece
    one love
    khasm
     
  7. triniti424

    triniti424 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Wowwwwwwwwwwwww *sigh* where can a sista find a convo like that lol :) smooth read :)
     
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