Black Poetry : phone call

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by wildflower7, Nov 12, 2002.

  1. wildflower7

    wildflower7 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    your wife called
    she said she wishes you would just come home
    that the children's questions are driving her crazy
    and you have a responsibility to them
    to explain the damage you've done
    she called me a whore
    asked me if i enjoyed destroying your family and mine
    what was i thinking running off with you leaving my babies behind
    and that if you cheated and ran off with me
    that you'd do the same with another
    that she doesn't understand
    she cried and yelled
    she called me a b*tch
    this was all while you were at the store
    i told her to calm down
    to breathe
    that you would be back next week
    and you could pick up the pieces then
    but that now you were helping me
    and living your life
    that this would not last because
    you are truly hers
    she said that she's going to spit in my face
    and that when we kiss i'm tasting her
    i told her that she tastes like fresh strawberries
    then she hung up on me
    so call her after we make love
    it's my time now
    deal with reality later.
     
  2. shaz

    shaz Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    This is so real and deep
     
  3. wildflower7

    wildflower7 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    my mind is on overdrive...
    trying to see situations from all angles. :spinstar:
     
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    redlady Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    holy cow! i'm feeling this one wildflower...was she a celebrity? LOL
     
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    girl you are wild!!!!!!!what else you got?
     
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    seven!


    you just cuttin' up today, i see!! :D

    this was sho' nuff reality poetry for
    yo ***!! :lol: mmm mmm mmm...

    itsallLove, chile.

    elayne.
     
  7. wildflower7

    wildflower7 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    red... in this flow, yes ;)

    bishop... i can't flood the page! i didn't mean for 3 to be up here...
    (where do you think wildflower came from? :D

    elayne... yeah, gurl, i got too much ish in my head today! :spinstar:
     
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    HighEmme Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I'm definitely feeling this one girl, it's kinda like my poem "Numbers in his Pocket", but on a deeper level!!
     
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    j'hiah Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    whoa :jawdrop:

    **** i'm speechless.
     
  10. alyce

    alyce Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    you know you wrote this thang, sista/friend/poetess/missus bomBASTIC! "WHEW!!!!!"

    thank ya!

    alyce
     
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