Khasm13 : philosopher's ode #1

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  1. Khasm13

    Khasm13 STAFF STAFF

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    the distant distractions of adverse reactions
    may lead to multiple subtractions and overboard actions
    akin to michael jackson's....
    becasue the masking is never lasting
    with changing faces basking
    in the shade to evade the supreme light that cascades
    like the police in the ghetto during a drug raid....
    some live in beds their parents already made
    some choose their own path and some just stay afraid....
    regardless of these types...the ones that travel the furthest
    know how to turn lemons into lemonade...
    only the malice free hearts have nothing to fear when the world becomes
    decayed and frayed...on the edges....
    while gluttons teeter on societies ledges for slices of cheese wedges...
    on bended knee with pagan pledges for pleasure...
    searching for benson and hedges treasure........packs
    once cheap they are now highly priced....in fact
    the total weight of sin is never exact....
    nor is it judged the same from white to black...

    cause only the wise truly understands that it is the sane man that is assumed crazy
    in a room filled with maniacs.....
     
  2. skrybble7

    skrybble7 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    This was like a poetic energy bar, small
    but packed with mad mental nutrition.
    flo on, poet
    One love
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    Man Khasm this joint pack a punch
    that make the mental mind float
    and open the gates to see what's not heard
    in a room of folks
    I really dig this piece
     
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    1poetsought Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    This #1 flew over the cuckoo's nest, soaring ever so high... peace.
     
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    nevar Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    love the flo poet flo on.:welldone:
     
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    Excellent,excellent write Khasm!:smooch:
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Yes, those who go further in this life tend to have an aura of positivity. Can't say I've been one of them, but I do really try. Really enjoyed the word play, and the message that you conveyed. Are you putting this into a series of odes?
     
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    GHETTOAMBITION Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    yes i was feelin dis piece
    u made such true statements dat i felt deeply
    i luved it
    flo on my bratha



    blackluv and bp
     
  9. Khasm13

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    thanks fam....
    i got many mo philosophy's...
    i aint dun...this was only one...

    one love
    khasm
     
  10. abstract219

    abstract219 ...standing on the shoulders of giants MEMBER

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    brilliant piece...like hip hop philosophy, but much deeper...i love the triplets, the rhythm...i was drumming out a beat to this one...
    great write, poet