Black Poetry : Phenominal Woman

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by THEONE, Apr 8, 2004.

  1. THEONE

    THEONE Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    WHHHHOOOOOOOOO!
    What a sight for sore eyes
    Better yet, NO eyes
    Are needed to grasp this mental masterpeice my minds been feeding me.

    Like a fiend on crack
    Im brainstorming, contemplating trying to play it back
    Replay I tell you
    Replay I chant again
    Feed this unnurtured mind you've left starvain

    I mean Im stuck in daze
    Mind in a haze
    Punch drunk some might say
    But I just say addicted to the phenominal picture you've depicted

    A stain on my brain
    Only one thought remains
    Is this LUV? Gods gift to man.
    Yet and still some want understand

    Let me break it down
    Its poetry in motion
    Waves ripplin thru the ocean
    With movements and grace like a mare
    A caress of warm summer air
    Scents so undescribable
    Roses might be an exeptional title

    But for now let say this: Phenominal Women in all her Bliss!!


    Copyrighted BY: L. Johnson All rights reserved
     
  2. watzinaname

    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Sometimes the words of a flow can capture us whole, feeling this vibe.
     
  3. THEONE

    THEONE Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thnks you!

     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    the caressing bliss of her is indeed phenominally awesome
    we all get into the motions .....lovely scribe poet !
     
  5. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    very nicely done
     
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    gempis Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Hey, I am diggin your flow, brothah. Very nice.
     
  7. THEONE

    THEONE Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thanks Thanks Thanks
     
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    Bluewater Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    oh you place a wonderful
    vibe in my mist
    liking this
    much love
    Peace
    BlueWater:heart:
     
  9. SensualReality

    SensualReality Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    feelin the flow big time rockin fresher
     
  10. Nita

    Nita Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Well said indeed....

    Phenominal Women ...yes a wonderful Blessing to have.
    Check you out THEONE....I'm lovin it :)
    Nita
    :heart:

     
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