Black Poetry : Phenomenal Mommy

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  1. cocobutterskyn

    cocobutterskyn Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Of
    many
    memorable and
    rewarding experiences
    I am overwhelmingly thankful for
    an honor God in all his grace bestowed upon women
    (Motherhood)
    blessed to be birth and raised in the glow of
    a wonderful loving and nurturing mother
    who instilled in my sister and I
    honorable qualities
    that we would experience
    the richness of
    our labors
    my
    sister
    gave birth to three
    sons
    I
    to
    a son
    and daughter
    on
    a regular basis
    we bask in the blessings of
    being mothers
    On
    this
    special day
    set aside in honor
    of a much deserving lifetime role
    I
    reflect on
    a phenomenal woman
    (my mommy)
    even
    through
    my motherhood journey
    (Still)
    she portrays her role
    exceptionally
    well
    though
    sometimes
    she overmedicates with her
    motherly disposition
    but
    all the care
    and unconditional love
    blossom joyous
    appreciation
    no
    words
    nor
    gifts are worthy
    to express her being
    the mother she is makes all the difference
    in the world
    GOOD
    times or BAD
    times
    are better times
    with her by my side sharing in (every)
    experience
    through childhood and
    adulthood through marriage and
    childbirth
    through divorce and
    life threatening
    mishaps
    never has she missed a step
    a
    constant force
    to be reckon
    with
    I
    try to
    fill her shoes
    and follow her footsteps
    to be a phenomenal mommy to my son
    and daughter as she is
    to her children
    a
    near
    fitting expression of
    gratitude

    Happy Mother’s Day
    Mommy

    I Love You
    (Dearly)






    Copyright©2008cj​
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Having a phenomenal mommy, one can only hope to shine nearly as brightly as she did and still does. But from all the pride and love this piece exudes, I feel your mother sees in you a phenomenal mommy as well. Gee, such warmth here poetess, Happy Mother's Day!
     
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    Happy Mother's Day Sis!!
    Wow ...I am compelled to :bowdown: to the greatness of Mom.
    And surely one for you :bowdown: ...for seeing that greatness :terrific:
     
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    such mothers are to be enjoyed...

    ...and appreciated on a regular basis. never let the pain of daily strain get in the way of the "i love you(s)" she's due to receive, constantly. a "phenomenal mommy," is becoming an endangered specie. ALL who have them, should show them much love...everyday.

    the river floweth.
     
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    Happy Mother's Day sis, this is a beautiful write. Jah bless for the gift of motherhood. I am ever so grateful and thankful for the blessing of mommy.
    Bless!
     
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    Wow Coco,

    Couldn't have said it better, our Mother is a phenomenal Mother, a phenomenal
    woman and a phenomenal person. Love you, Mother....HAPPY MOTHER'S DAY!

    Happy Mother's Day, Sister dear...

    epiphany:heart:
     
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    THis was so beautiful .......I really love this and the depth of love that flowz
    HAPPY MOTHER'S DAY /................................WOW !!!!!
     
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    GREAT TRIBUTE

    i hope you and your moms enjoyed your day

    :terrific:

    :bowdown:
     
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    cocobutterskyn Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    She is truly...

    the GREATEST mom! And I'm sure you all feel the same about yours.:) I appreciate you guys time and comments, BIGTIME!.

    MaddSistahlyLove!
    Coco:dance:
     
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    And you and your sister are phenomenal daughters and mommies as well by striving to honor by emulating the womb which nurtured you.

    Fabulous piece, CocoB!
     
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