Black Poetry : peter tosh freestyle (the argument)

[tichaona]

coming in hot hot hot
firing some shot shot shot

coming in red hot hot hot
it’s a poetical shot shot shot

so me say bumbo klaat klaat klaat
when him come spew rot rot rot

me shall not not not
get rid of stuff that’s hot hot hot

what the blood klaat klaat klaat
me man brain gone to pot pot pot

de rum make de man sot sot sot
him done forgot got got

that me him didn’t beget get get
so him dinner me set set set

and den me sit sit sit
watch him have de fit fit fit

him coming on hot hot hot
firing plenty shot shot shot

but move me him shall not not not
ras klaat klaat klaat


© 2004 Tichaona M. Chinyelu All Rights Reserved

 

[gempis]

Like the skat style, baby. Hey, welcome to the site! Lookin forward to readin more of your original style.

 

[$$RICH$$]

a wonderful creation lovin the poetic hand

 

[MzBlkAngel]

nice flow enjoyed the read.....

 

[Prizefighter16]

unique style, very creative....loved how you used patoi in this

keep the flow goin>>>>