Black Poetry : peter tosh freestyle (the argument)

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  1. tichaona

    tichaona Active Member MEMBER

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    coming in hot hot hot
    firing some shot shot shot

    coming in red hot hot hot
    it’s a poetical shot shot shot

    so me say bumbo klaat klaat klaat
    when him come spew rot rot rot

    me shall not not not
    get rid of stuff that’s hot hot hot

    what the blood klaat klaat klaat
    me man brain gone to pot pot pot

    de rum make de man sot sot sot
    him done forgot got got

    that me him didn’t beget get get
    so him dinner me set set set

    and den me sit sit sit
    watch him have de fit fit fit

    him coming on hot hot hot
    firing plenty shot shot shot

    but move me him shall not not not
    ras klaat klaat klaat


    © 2004 Tichaona M. Chinyelu All Rights Reserved
     
  2. gempis

    gempis Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Like the skat style, baby. Hey, welcome to the site! Lookin forward to readin more of your original style.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    a wonderful creation lovin the poetic hand
     
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    nice flow enjoyed the read.....
     
  5. Prizefighter16

    Prizefighter16 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    unique style, very creative....loved how you used patoi in this

    keep the flow goin>>>>:)
     
  6. tichaona

    tichaona Active Member MEMBER

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    thanks for the supportive words. this one is one of my more successful attempts at freestyle.
     
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