Black Poetry : Pet Peeve(senario)

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  1. cocobutterskyn

    cocobutterskyn Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I noticed him chillin' across the way
    from the back his broad shoulder's
    were sho'nuff hangin' that tailored suit
    he slowly turned a bit to his side
    my eyes drank in his bomb physique.
    his fade was crisp and I
    homed in on his charmin' smile.
    I had to find away to get him to speak
    .
    I spiritedly walked in his direction to
    make sure our eyes made connection
    now that I captured his attention
    I smiled and strolled pass politely
    droppin' my bag,
    "opps"
    he quickly moved to pick it up.
    "ol' clumsy me. thank you Brotha."
    he looked me straight in the eyes and
    with a big smile he said,
    "you're welcome babygirl,
    I'm glad to help a sistah out."
    the stank breath that came behind
    those words had to be toxic
    my mouth fell open and I involuntarily spoke,
    "Oh my dayum"
    in a concerned tone he asked,
    "what's wrong babygirl?"
    I made up some lame excuse and got
    the hell out of there before a brotha
    make a sistah bring up her lunch. :puke:

    Yuk moufs just t'aint hittin' it. :nono:



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  2. baller

    baller Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    well...look at it this way...you accomplished your goal: you got him to speak to you.:) anyway, you could always introduce him to the joys of hygienes. who knows, he could have been the man of your dreams...that needed a few tips to gain PERFECTION.
     
  3. UbZoRbShUn

    UbZoRbShUn Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    CCB

    :D gurl you shoulda just left the "BIG RED" for him and I'm sure he would have got the message





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  4. cocobutterskyn

    cocobutterskyn Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Sherykah,
    Gurl, you gots my sides hurtin' bigtime
    I's :laugh: so hard.
    You probably right about that. :D


    Baller,
    If a brotha is grown and
    ain't found the joys of hygiene...
    it t'aint happenin' :laugh:



    Zorb,
    Chile, if it was in the bag...
    I would have given it to him
    st8 up. :laugh:


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  5. msluciousb

    msluciousb Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I second this in motion!

    NAW, Y'ALL....BAD BREATH! I CAN'T WORK WITH IT EITHER...
    CAUSE IF THE BREATH IS STANK , WHAT ELSE IS STANK?:confused:
     
  6. cocobutterskyn

    cocobutterskyn Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    :laugh:@Msb....
    Girl, now that's truth!


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    hey keep a bottle os scope in your purse for future confrontations.
     
  8. UbZoRbShUn

    UbZoRbShUn Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    nawl he shoulda

    just brushed his dayum teeth and his tongue. I agree with mslb if the breath is kickin then what else is funky????? and Bishop brovas should do a check fo they leave the house. Shoot how you gone look all delicious gotta sista all wurked up and hot dayum your breath smellz like trash or something worse?



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  9. Amun-Ra

    Amun-Ra Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Whoa!

    I had to pull up on that one--brush them **** teeth--stank breath--wheewee!--can't handle it--LOL--Amun-Ra

    :)