Black Poetry : perspication (to the second power) (reply to renae)

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  1. thepoetsean

    thepoetsean Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    something more than bodies intertwining and moaning and whining...

    how about
    thoughts of us
    resting on pastures that reach
    beyond the plane of human thought?

    how about
    mental kisses that linger
    after the clock strikes forever--
    and the bell tolls on life...

    how about a metaphysical exchange--
    to revisit all metaphysical exchanges
    touch my soul and--
    let me lay in yours--
    inhaling all that compliments me--
    exhaling all negativity--
    until you and i are we--
    indivisibly--
    spiritually

    religiously.

    how about the pleasure of perspication
    how about a good mutual
    mental *****--

    "hittin' it from the front and back and all around"

    laughing in its afterglow.

    how about perspication
    to the second power?


    (mentalpenetrationisperspication)


    sean.gregory.revsited
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    more so now
    da mental love shared
    is so beautiful
    and within da heart it has a moan
    of great comfort as the soul
    become rapidly caressed
    u flow head on coz i'm listening at ya !
     
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    Legacy21 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    MMMMMMM (with pleasure). This is a much welcomed luxury of words in the midst of so much day to day turmoil. How mentally stimulating and pleasing this piece is. I am so feeling the flow and concept of this piece. I definitely dig it, and this is the way to get down in love and with soul kisses and mental carresses...ahh yes this is a piece of heaven.....
     
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    cocobutterskyn Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    A very beautiful reply


    I enjoyed the read.
    Thanks :)

    souldeep!
    Coco
    :heart:
     
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