Black Poetry : Personally SPEAKing

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by DymePlaya2g, May 29, 2002.

  1. DymePlaya2g

    DymePlaya2g Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    my words wont romance you
    speaking in hushed lovers tone
    soft/ sweet/ melodic
    methodic in expression
    were as unforced feelings and freedom
    impact each syllable
    nouns/ adjectives and verbs
    strewn about
    seperate but definate
    congregated
    and come to be
    came to be
    ARE
    indirectly direct representations of
    hazy clear manifestations of
    D-A-V-E
    dont just LOOK but SEE
    that i dont write love poems
    not in the you're my world
    im lost without you sense
    but in the yours + mines yields OURS
    love sense
    in the always found because we are where we are
    and mean to be love sense
    in the sense that
    i can prepare a quick line
    to nourish your soul and mind
    make sense?
    i write to release me
    like ripe pears from a peach tree
    fed in small pieces see
    for easier digestion
    devoid of indigestion
    these antagonized mentals
    of a novice lovers mind
    battered but still active
    disguised but recognizeable...
    so NO!
    my words wont romance you
    but...
    they'll always be there!!!


    Love&Respect
    DP2G

    p.s. Hope y'all 'memba ME :D
     
  2. msluciousb

    msluciousb Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    And that is good enough!

    Brother, that's still a love poem...it doesn't have to fit anyone's mold, long as you are speaking form your soul.
    Well written scribe!
    BLESSINSG ON YA HOUSE!
     
  3. cocobutterskyn

    cocobutterskyn Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I enjoyed this pleasant piece of poetry.
    I really loved how you broke it down.

    Nice to read you again. :)


    Scribeaboutit! It helps.
    CCBSKYN :heart:
     
  4. DymePlaya2g

    DymePlaya2g Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    THNX...

    ~MSLUSCIOUSB~ i agree whole-heartedly...the words definately come str8 from the heart to feed the mind. thanks for reading.

    ~CoCobutterskyn~ *shakin mah head* now i misst u fa sho...so glad u took a minute to check out ya boi...its appreciated...

    LOVE & RESPECT LADIES,
    DP2G
     
  5. UbZoRbShUn

    UbZoRbShUn Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    yeah I memba

    you Dyme cause you still owe me 5 dollas ha ha ha . Beautiful peace....



    One
     
  6. Desert Storm

    Desert Storm Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thank you Dyme

    I can alwayz count on you.
    Lovin this. Good reppin baby! Bring it home!
    Desert Storm
     
  7. poeticdelight

    poeticdelight Member MEMBER

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    man, you have me tongue twisted

    "melodic, methodic" :lol:


    overall nice job


    pd
     
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