Black Poetry : Personal Rain

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by DymePlaya2g, Jun 25, 2001.

  1. DymePlaya2g

    DymePlaya2g Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    glance out my window
    sunshine has ceased
    while rain and clouds dominate the sky
    i wonder why
    almost cry
    but conclude it's needed
    for life to flourish and maintain
    not in vain
    but with purpose that's definate
    don't question it
    instead welcome it
    for much like the rain i shed tears
    not equated with fears
    but because my love for you
    is so deep
    that it saturates my soul
    blossoms and blooms
    as i sleep
    personal rain is what i've
    come to call it
    and if my feelings
    are to survive and ripen
    i'm gonna need all of it!
     
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    baller Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    could you pass me a klenex..

    i feel a touch of rain coming on...

    flow'n.
     
  3. UbZoRbShUn

    UbZoRbShUn Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    "but because my love for you
    is so deep
    that it saturates my soul"


    that's love right there. Glad I peeked in here today. Refreshing



    One
     
  4. DymePlaya2g

    DymePlaya2g Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    BALLER~ have 2 my brutha...and let it rain!

    UbZoRbShUn~ glad that u FELT this one!

    LOVE&RESPECT
    DP2G
     
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    CREATIVE

    creative i felt that!
     
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    alyce Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I just love the word itself

    "rain"....speaks to me of outpouring, showering, blessing, anointing....

    probably the most beautiful culmination of the act of receiving....and giving....

    awesome, this...touching me, personally.

    thank you

    a
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    man i feel this so deep within

    my rainful eyes waters up! i need a napkin.....
     
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