Black Poetry : Personal Memoirs

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  1. N2urSoul

    N2urSoul Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Loved -with my black man yesterday
    and I am reminiscing through our tomorrow
    MNEME ~
    wrapped in his onyx...blanket
    a memorialized him...inside/outside of me
    oooooohhh I have a recollection that's so profound
    - found -
    remembering his hard, hot body
    I'm left awe struck in wonder...
    the pathos, the affection of the response I
    retained when
    I
    rubbed
    him
    ...his strong, thick neck
    his lickably soft lips
    his endowment -
    a mental memo left impressed into
    my golden wheat fields... -enumerated
    I also recall his - self, spirt, auricle and cast
    coming...
    and going -
    in and out
    like a majestic noble man
    Even today I feel him
    every now & then
    I feel him all over me

    I will always keep my man's memoirs guarded
    They are, after all...all mine
    all six foot two inches of him
    ...each wet kiss
    from his lean warm body next to me
    I will forever remember
    my man's manness making more memories
    into
    our
    future~
     
  2. GQ

    GQ Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Yeah it's best....

    to keep those memoirs guarded most def!!! ;)

    I likes this flow N2!!!

    L&R
    GQ
     
  3. N2urSoul

    N2urSoul Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    GQ

    Must be guarded at all times - right?!
     
  4. belahni

    belahni Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    speak

    the truth sista! this is too true!

    B
     
  5. Destee

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    very nice N2urSoul

    yes, keep this where the rare jewels are stored!

    :heart:

    Destee
     
  6. GQ

    GQ Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Absolutely!!!!

    Don't let ya guard down ~ unless ya wanna get "got"!!! ;)

    L&R
    GQ
     
  7. N2urSoul

    N2urSoul Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Destee

    Thanks for reading ME!
    Glad you liked it!!
     
  8. N2urSoul

    N2urSoul Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Behlani

    Most definitely must let the
    truth
    be
    known!!

    Glad ya' liked the scribe.
     
  9. N2urSoul

    N2urSoul Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Fo' ...Sho

    GQ - you're absolutely
    CORRECTO MUNDO!!
    Thanks sweetie!
     
  10. blakverb

    blakverb Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    SLAMMIN'

    N2-

    I had to replay, reread, repeat, and indulge myself in repitition before I could respond to this. Actually, I had to bathe myself in the words to really feel it. As usual this is "Niiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiice!"
    (and it felt good)

    one love,blak
     
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