Black Poetry : personal letter no. 9 (forhim)/VaniOku#2

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  1. Scry'be

    Scry'be Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    *This joint is dedicated to a young man who's captured my heart. he's a fellow church mate experiencing some things i've went through so i'm there for him as a watchman with him being my ward. ~Rev. O.




    in
    u i’ve
    seen what
    i used 2 be.
    in
    u i
    see a chance to
    make right things in yo
    life afta the mess i’ve
    made in mine.
    in
    yo presence i grasp a glass
    of liquid redemption;
    a chance frm God to
    do things
    right…
    i think I’m gon
    get it
    right
    this time!
    i won’t molest u,
    i’ll build u up…buildin’
    me up…redeemin u and i
    we gon’ frame each day as a
    success and make our way
    to righteousness.
    in
    u i’ll
    empty prayerspraiseloveandtrust
    and u’ll
    open the
    door to HIS
    joy and redemption.




    VaniOku (forusboth)



    we gon be gifted-
    we gon take the
    broken and
    rebuild
    it

    in u i’ll see new days-in
    me u’ll get use’d too free…
    we’ll savor
    life and new mornins.




    ‘House of Atreus’ Publishing © 2007
     
  2. watzinaname

    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Enjoying how you're encorporating both styles, poet. To have the strength to pull another out of a fire similar to that which engulfed you is marvelous.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    beautifully written and well expressed in poetic blessing
     
  4. Scry'be

    Scry'be Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Sis Watz Thank you so much mami!

    Bro Rich...I appreciate you my brotha!
     
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    This ish is SOOO TIGHT!!!! Poet I'm really feelin your words. You takin me back, you takin me back and I'm so lovin it!!!

    *Sweet*
     
  6. Scry'be

    Scry'be Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Yo SwtT thanks for the words poet!!!!!!
     
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