Black Poetry : personal letter no. 8 (tohimw/theredhatandbeaut.eyes)

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  1. Scry'be

    Scry'be Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    amazin’…
    saw u
    as i walk’d inside
    the library…
    mr deck’d out
    in red,
    good lookin’
    eyes wide, bright
    and full’o yo self!
    even on yo
    off day you look smashin’
    (did i just write smashin’?)
    brief premonitions of
    u and me
    us
    discarded clothin’
    my hands-yo chest,
    yo lips-my_________(fill in the blank)
    or perhaps
    vice versa.
    thing is
    i thank you look betta
    than good…truth
    is i
    kno u’ll neva, neva
    let me in on
    that level.
    But,
    its alright for me
    to dream….right?


    ‘House of Atreus’ Publishing © 2007
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    often dreameth do come true keep it alive for Mr. RED
     
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    Sha'iyn Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    daaaaaaamn scrybe

    why you gotta make a brova feel all good like dat? you know, i got them light eyes so, it felt like you was talkin' to da kid. anyway, i felt dat there, gurl.

    get it shawty!

    ShugaShane
     
  4. Scry'be

    Scry'be Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Brotha RICH...thanks for holding a brotha down....


    LOL SHA'IYN thanks for the love papa unfortunately i'm a bruh LOL
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    As Rich said, sometimes dreams do come true, and when you least expect them to. I really enjoyed the stream of consciousness flair here. Diggin your work.
     
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    Sha'iyn Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    daaaaaaaamn scrybe

    LOLOLOLOLOL man, you know this poetry is decieving when speaking about certain features. you must've been talking about a gurl wit some hazel joints. anyway, my bad bruh. LOL you got a sister??
     
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    4EVERLUV Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Scry'be:
    Hott Drop for sure.

    [email protected]'iyn - You had me confused. You guys are wild.


    Much Luv
     
  8. Scry'be

    Scry'be Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    4everluv thanks for the love and support mami.

    Bruh Sha'iyn...yup I got a sister LOL
    unfortunately my man the joint is a piece dedicated to a dude...taken from the view point of a friend of mine, my homeboi.
     
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