Black Poetry : personal letter no. 7

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  1. Scry'be

    Scry'be Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    i always
    make sure that
    i hoard each moment
    time gives
    me to my bosom-
    makin’ sho I
    record all the trips and
    trifles of this life
    on the inseam of
    my breath.
    now
    that’s real!


    'House of Atreus' Publishing 2007
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    word up !!!!
     
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    Every breath inhaled and exhaled makes a difference. I hear ya poet.

    I need to call your attention to Destee's thread regarding our poetic etiquette, http://destee.com/forums/showthread.php?t=11896 .
    Please limit your poetic pieces to no more than 5 on the front page. Thank you for understanding.
     
  4. Da Street So'ja

    Da Street So'ja Banned MEMBER

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    i love this piece

    so deep

    the growth of knowledge

    this piece touches the ceiling of infinity

    the ceiling of life

    because in all essence

    IT IS LIFE

    great piece poet
     
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    Tha-Emissary Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I'll fourth it, Word & That's a Breath of Life!!!
     
  6. Scry'be

    Scry'be Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    BROTHA RICH...thank you for feeling me sir!

    SISTER WATZ...thank you for your love and the side-bar about poetic etiquette.

    STREET SO'JA much love to you bruh for feeling me so much.

    EMISSARY...thank you thank you thank you!
     
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