Black Poetry : Personal Letter No. 6/Oku #1

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by Scry'be, Jun 2, 2007.

  1. Scry'be

    Scry'be Well-Known Member MEMBER

    Joined:
    May 22, 2007
    Messages:
    174
    Likes Received:
    1
    Ratings:
    +1

    honey i
    can pen 1,000
    emotions my
    paper will never
    smile, yawn or
    frown.
    how do u
    pen love across
    features that
    don't
    recognize that
    language?




    'House of Atreus' Publishing 2007




    the Oku is my derivative of a haiku. the syllable count
    is 7634




    i'm buried to my feet-i'm
    washin' moon and soil from
    hands that till
    broken tears/dreams.





    'House of Atreus' Publishing 2007
     
  2. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

    Country:
    United States
    Joined:
    Mar 21, 2001
    Messages:
    69,983
    Likes Received:
    3,977
    Gender:
    Male
    Occupation:
    BUSINESS owner
    Location:
    Da~WINDY*CITY //CHICAGO
    Ratings:
    +4,177
    write da darn thing poet !
    when words can't express da love in a language allow da feeling of emotion speak !
     
  3. watzinaname

    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

    Country:
    United States
    Joined:
    Oct 4, 2003
    Messages:
    16,340
    Likes Received:
    114
    Location:
    Northeast
    Ratings:
    +122
    I think we all have been there, searching for just those right words when we want to express so, so much. I agree with Rich, then you have to let those emotions drip on paper, which you do so well, poet.
     
  4. Scry'be

    Scry'be Well-Known Member MEMBER

    Joined:
    May 22, 2007
    Messages:
    174
    Likes Received:
    1
    Ratings:
    +1
    Brotha RICH

    Sister WATZ

    I appreciate you both greatly! Thank you for feeling me!
     
  5. 4EVERLUV

    4EVERLUV Well-Known Member MEMBER

    Joined:
    Jun 2, 2006
    Messages:
    1,915
    Likes Received:
    53
    Gender:
    Female
    Ratings:
    +55
    I've been reading your pen and I am
    totally diggn' your flavor.
     
  6. Scry'be

    Scry'be Well-Known Member MEMBER

    Joined:
    May 22, 2007
    Messages:
    174
    Likes Received:
    1
    Ratings:
    +1
    4ever...thank you muchly queen...i'm blessed beyond!
     
  7. GHETTOAMBITION

    GHETTOAMBITION Well-Known Member MEMBER

    Joined:
    Mar 18, 2006
    Messages:
    622
    Likes Received:
    7
    Ratings:
    +7
    very nice
    that is a good question, "how do u pen love across features that don't recognize the lauguage?"
    i bet i know the answer..lol
     
  8. Scry'be

    Scry'be Well-Known Member MEMBER

    Joined:
    May 22, 2007
    Messages:
    174
    Likes Received:
    1
    Ratings:
    +1
    Yo GHETTOA...how so you pen love across features not recognizable?
     
Loading...