Black Poetry : Personal Letter No. 5

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  1. Scry'be

    Scry'be Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    so
    i missed
    out on the
    expression of
    what could have
    been more than
    just u and i.
    see
    i kno
    we were meant
    to be unity, but
    commitment and i slept in
    different beds...we weren't
    ready to hob-nob, weren't
    ready to delve into each other.
    *sighs*
    now i'm prepared...
    but i see
    ur door
    is barred...
    ....does this mean
    i can't come
    in?




    'House of Atreus' Publishing/2007
     
  2. Da Street So'ja

    Da Street So'ja Banned MEMBER

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    EVERYTHING happens for a reason

    and EVERYTHING happens in its' season (in its' time)

    be patient brethren

    be patient

    rushing into something never meets your expections

    let it take its' course

    peace poet
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    often what seem open is just a reflection of what if
    and more then none when one truely know then da
    doors are open .......so walk right in
     
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    Sometimes when you finally realize how you truly feel, the other person has grown tired. Perhaps the bars will come off. How you make those emotions drip, poet.
     
  5. Scry'be

    Scry'be Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Peace and Purpose to you all:

    So'ja

    Watz

    Rich

    thank you three for being you and being prolific!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
     
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    I love your flow and I loved your wordplay poet. Keep on doing you. Everything happens for a reason....P.S.: Did I say I loved your Flow??? lol

    *Sweet*
     
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    Scry'be Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    YO SwtT Thank you so so so much poet for the love...I appreciate you and I'm humbled greatly. Looking forward to more and more of your work!!!!!
     
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    Scry'be:
    Now this one really hit home with me.
    Talk about taking thoughts out of my mind.
    Write it then....



    Much Luv
     
  9. Scry'be

    Scry'be Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    4ever...thank you my sista for feeling me...keep diggin me ma...cause I sho dig you! Love
     
  10. GHETTOAMBITION

    GHETTOAMBITION Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    very interesting write
    it seems to me that u can't enter
     
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