Quiet Poetry Lounge : Personal Letter No. 4

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by Scry'be, Jun 1, 2007.

  1. Scry'be

    Scry'be Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    i'm
    sho u kno
    that i smeared
    three mornin's across
    my skin like salve...hopin
    to keep the moisture
    of life within my pores...
    i want to
    pulsate with the laughter
    of stars and if i shld belch
    then it shall be effortless
    rings of metamorphasis...i
    bet i can see sunsets and dusk in ur
    eyes.
    when we gon turn on our bloodstream,
    carryin our footsteps of progress;
    and tune that mutha up high...high enough
    that we drown out disappointment and
    course down the river
    of new?


    'House of Atreus' Publishing/2007
     
  2. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    this open letter series is hot and got my eyez glue'd
    very hot spray up close and personal on da letter
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Those visuals, gee, you know how to open up the readers' senses, poet.
     
  4. Scry'be

    Scry'be Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thank you mama...I appreciate you greatly!
     
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    Hmmph.

    Feeling this one too.

    So subtle but I can feel the notion.

    Tru Tru
    Thank you
    DS
     
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    Hi Scry'be
    Wow! I'm capture by the
    Smooth warmth of your poem
    It has indeed taken me there.
    Swoosh! Yes
    So so nice. I hope to read more from you poet.


    Peace~N~Love
     
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    PLATINUMILLITY1 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    This is my 1st of the 4 sooooo....yeah I gotta handle dat!!!!!
    :10200:
     
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