Black Poetry : Persistence (Haiku)

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by Heartbeat, Oct 4, 2001.

  1. Heartbeat

    Heartbeat Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I have much to do
    In quest of success I move
    Til death I will try

    BE
     
  2. alyce

    alyce Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I do believe

    you said it all....

    Bravo, Poet!!

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    Yes, yes, yes

    I am surely enjoying the "haiku spirit" here at Destee's.
    I love this poem... a very inspiring and powerful 17 syllables.
    Persistence is what I needed to hear this morning...dealing with a particular situation. It is haiku like this that motivate me to keep going.

    Thank you Heartbeat.

    " I have much to do
    In quest of success I move
    Til death I will try "
     
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