Black Poetry : Persian Apple

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by define, Aug 14, 2004.

  1. define

    define Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    yes yes yes
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    welcome to destee.com poetic playground
    welcome to the new home u found
    welcome from above as i bless u some love

    tyte scribing flow on poet

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    PropheticNsyght Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Divinely delicious and Welcome to this wonderful place. Can't wait to read more of your work.
     
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    Welcome to destee. Your poetry is rich in every line it seems poet. Waiting to read more.
     
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    Hey now..welcome to destee.com
    glad to see you made it!!!
    tight scribe..looking for more
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    Reply to Define

    Define , Your use of alliteration becomes heavenly clouds
    Clouds not clumsily clustered but floating in the crowds
    In the blue ocean above your words float like a white dove
    Let me tell you I appreciated your poem, accept this love

    Seize the Day!
    Great Poem YOU have made!

    Please show me some of your love
    Today read and reply to my thread entitled:
    " Dear Alpha Male, please help me, signed the slave from torment land"
    Please tell me about my skills, tell me if their weak
    or show nuff real----------Thank You

    If you read and replied once!
    Do it again, kick up a notch!----------Thank you
     
  7. define

    define Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thanks to all those who showed me love, ill hit yall's poems up later, peaces
     
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    daroc Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    dang.. let me tell my moms to go to the store right quick.. cuz u making me want some georgia peaches......nice one poet...
     
  9. PurpleMoons

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    Hahaha.....LOL!

    I laugh because I loved
    the way you played
    with this!!!!!!!

    Very clever and all so
    Tyte!!!!

    Hey! Next time can you
    leave my zodiac out of
    this? lol

    Loved it none the less!!!!
    Keep droping 'em brother!!!!
     
  10. deepy

    deepy going above and beyond PREMIUM MEMBER

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    the title broought me in
    but dare i say with all the questions posed (and answered)
    i might have to let the fruit go for a minute
    interesting piece
     
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