Black Poetry : Perplexed Emotions......its been awhile ya'll

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by Doryea, May 9, 2007.

  1. Doryea

    Doryea Member MEMBER

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    intrigued hmmm.....no intriguingly seductive
    Subconsciously living or dreaming reality.....
    I see... so muc.... potential in such a confined packaged
    And I ponder....
    Is she fate or was she destined to cross my path since my dna formed
    From day one I knew there was connectiona dn now it's sealed
    but does she feel the same?..... hmmm....
    So many question plenty of feeling bundled inside
    Do I love her?......
    Yes,.....but does she feel the same?....
    Mind going in circle... to and fro jsut tryin tofigure out wats next
    WHat to say and what wil be the outcome of one's passion
    There so much i wanna say but she draws me blank
    I gotta stop now..... I can't write this
    i feel so helpless, vulnerable captured with so much beauty
    how can one ever settle for me?.....but she does
    Everday constantly thinkin where? and what she doin
    I love her.... i kno i do
    but does she feel the same?....
    Deep down she caresses me without knowin she's even there
    She's apart of me intertwined with my soul incarcerated in my heart forever
    see if she could only understand that i cant allow myself to love
    cant let myself drift into her everlasting loving abyss
    To let go of myself and dive into her arms, allowing them to shield every cell of my being
    Makes me so vulnerable to her...but i cant let her know

    ...it all pains me to see her reaching out to me trying to love this inadequate being of pain
    inadequate...yes....
    i guess a part of me cant stop to think...
    why could such a gorgeous, selfless, intellectual black woman be interested in
    this fragile, inadequate, almost lifeless frame
    i jus cant.... I'm trying....
    But does she feel the same?
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    feeling the emotions flowin and the depth of being open
    just let one know your true inner feelings ....................

    Oh yes welcome back nice to be reading you again
     
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    4EVERLUV Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Doryea:
    WOW!!! That was really beautiful.
    And I am sure she does. How could
    she not, with words like that.


    Much Luv
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    You could be exactly who she seeks, you may be precious in her eyes. Quite emotively posed.
     
  5. Doryea

    Doryea Member MEMBER

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    Thank ya'll for the feed but yeah most my pieces are very emotional and a releease for me... I only speak from my heart and nothign less and just to let ya'll in on something my name Doryea is actually hers.....


    Peace ya'll
     
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