Black Poetry : Perpetual Motion Coma (Ghetto Coliseum Pt. 2)

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  1. blakverb

    blakverb Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    We exist in a perpetual motion coma
    hanging' on the corners from Flatbush
    to Tacoma /heat on hip/ crips killin' bloods
    bloods killin' crips and all we see are
    misguided warriors outlining the concrete
    when the only color that should matter
    is brown or black or whatever shade you
    classify yourself as/we got this affliction bad,
    that self hate with no ending date and bodies
    remain fresh on the pavement the process
    of enslavement that entraps brothers minds
    and sisters behinds with signs of "open to the
    public" around her pubic and all the "too"cool cats
    run up in the kitty....and now it's a pity that
    this misguided sisters life is designated "shytty"
    disease infestations contamination has her life
    on the clock now...and we are in a perpetual
    motion coma...laughing and dancing, dunking
    and rapping bling blinging and sing singing
    while brain dead...we some talented folks and
    what happened to the talented tenth that
    DuBois spoke of? Lack of self love has too many
    black folks leaving the others behind with no
    information how they made it/see it's not the man
    it's selfishness that enslaves us and the pathological
    sickness to leave one's family behind while on course to
    sit down and sit with other folks to eat the main course/
    no chitterlings, no corn bread, no black eye peas,
    no collard greens, no hog maws, no sweet potatoe pie,
    no butter beans, no okra.....no...no...no..no
    no **** soul...pass been revoked...no ghetto
    for double agents
    no ghetto for double agents no ghetto for
    self induced comatose people refusing to wake
    up and continue to kill us by not caring for the
    people...Huey, Harriet, Martin, Malcolm and Medgar,
    Marcus, Crispus, and all of you that fought for us
    I pray that you did not die in vain so please set the alarm
    to try and wake up the masses like the grass does
    when touched by the rain.

    (c)2001 blakverb
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    ys indeed sir verb

    man u laying down some knowledge
    ad wisdom and truth .....what a wake up call !!:eek:
     
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    blakverb Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    $$RICH$$,

    thanks my brother. I tell you I'm gone get some money up and by you a cape cause you show folks love at a blinding pace :)

    respect
    blak
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    got so much to spread

    so i give and give :D
     
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    cocobutterskyn Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Blak

    You are igniting my mental. Speaking of Coliseum....This should be Spoken in such a place. I wanted to stand up, jump up and down, wave my hand side to side and shout, show them what they don't see. Your poetry reflects your name, blak in action.

    Madd Sistahly Love
    CCBSKYN :heart:
     
  6. Danilyn

    Danilyn Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    :cool: You hit the nail

    right on the head. Keep educating us, maybe one day we'll all wake up.
     
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